Well this is my first time putting up a song of mine, i'm not sure how long angelfire will keep it up there but here it is. I just kinda got it thrown together after fooling around with a few riffs. Also no singing yet(yeah i know it can make it boring).
http://www.angelfire.com/jazz/tkstuff/
Any criticism would be awesome. Thanks.
Tim
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typing as i listen. the intro sounds a little like something staind would do.
guitar: ok, first of all your guitar is out of tune. nice little progression but your rhythm is off a lot. especially when you get into the full strumming. metronome's are our best friends
so i guess in the end, the progression is interesting, i liked the progression a lot especially in the end. nothing that ive heard before (that's good). but i never found a beat in the song and the guitar was out of tune. It was choppy too. so work on the beat and tune the guitar and you have something pretty decent there.
guitar: ok, first of all your guitar is out of tune. nice little progression but your rhythm is off a lot. especially when you get into the full strumming. metronome's are our best friends
so i guess in the end, the progression is interesting, i liked the progression a lot especially in the end. nothing that ive heard before (that's good). but i never found a beat in the song and the guitar was out of tune. It was choppy too. so work on the beat and tune the guitar and you have something pretty decent there.
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