Original "Faces"

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Unread post by mattinbeloit » Tue Dec 13, 2005 5:32 pm

I worte this song last night and recorded it today so tell me what you think, it reminds me of a mix in two step and typical situation...

http://s39.yousendit.com/e.aspx?id=2XN6 ... 12J0I37J4M

a few more links in case it dies...

http://s40.yousendit.com/e.aspx?id=0WHK ... YW0TLKMESG
http://s40.yousendit.com/e.aspx?id=1X3H ... BVNW8DJ326
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Unread post by Cor » Tue Dec 13, 2005 7:42 pm

Not bad all-around. I hear the "typical" sound in it.

The singing is pretty good, it just sounds like you were holding back a little bit.

The song as a whole was very listenable.

Good job.
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Unread post by 6_strings_for_life » Wed Dec 14, 2005 5:24 pm

i really like it, a bit short but the guitar and vocals are solid..

and yea i also heard a little of typical in there

overall nice song, keep up the good work
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Unread post by mattinbeloit » Wed Dec 14, 2005 7:41 pm

ya its not done yet, im going to go into a chorus real quick after the pause, not quite done with it and with finals im not going to be able to work on it much for a few days...

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