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Dheibs
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by Dheibs » Tue Nov 29, 2005 2:11 pm
I was bored today so i decided to record a live take of the stone. I fucked up lyrics sometime i think but i was to lazy to record it all over again. please critique. the link is below. thanks
http://sio.midco.net/hbys6
The file is named "Final.mp3"
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by Dheibs » Tue Nov 29, 2005 3:58 pm
anyone?
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by Cor » Tue Nov 29, 2005 4:35 pm
Just listened. Guitar is good. A few flubs, with some rythymic issues during the singing.
The singing is little emotionless to me. It's not bad, it just needs work. A few off pitch spots.
Not bad, not great.
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by RunsWithBuffalo » Sat Dec 03, 2005 2:57 pm
The guitar is pretty good. I think I am hearing an extra note in the d----5--5---2---3---2-------- but other than that it sounds pretty solid. As far as the voice is concerned, the quality is good, off key at parts, but overall not bad. the key to this song is having the guitar part down where you could play it unconscious. Did you record these tracks separately or at the same time? I would suggest recording your guitar part first and then your vocals, that way you dont have to think abou two things at once.
Good job though, keep posting.
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by horsmar15 » Sat Dec 03, 2005 11:29 pm
I agree with comments made above, guitar was good for the most part. The vocals are a little thin and sometimes are off key. In my opinon to make this song sound good you really need to belt out the vocals and be confident about it.
I'll play it first and tell you what it is later.
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by Dheibs » Sun Dec 04, 2005 1:48 am
ok, thanks for the comments, ill be workin on them
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by Dheibs » Sun Dec 04, 2005 1:51 am
by the way, just got my new mic in the mail today...Neumann KMS 105, its soooo incredible
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by sheabraden » Sun Dec 04, 2005 11:59 am
I thought it was very good, your voice is soothing and guitar has a couple off beats but nothing anyone but us will notice
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by RunsWithBuffalo » Mon Dec 05, 2005 12:08 am
Holy shit, how much did that sucker cost?
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by bpongo09 » Mon Dec 05, 2005 12:43 am
Dheibs wrote:by the way, just got my new mic in the mail today...Neumann KMS 105, its soooo incredible
Price + Recording now.
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by briguy945 » Mon Dec 05, 2005 9:58 am
Nice job on a tough song
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by Dheibs » Tue Dec 06, 2005 12:54 am
RunsWithBuffalo wrote:Holy shit, how much did that sucker cost?
Brand new for 350 + free shipping on ebay. I should re-record the vocals with the neumann. on the recording i used a shitty nady i got for 50 bucks or sumthing
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by Dheibs » Tue Dec 06, 2005 12:56 am
briguy945 wrote:Nice job on a tough song
Thank you. i shouldve recorded it all seperately though, it prolly wouldve made it much better
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by Trippin Hillbilly » Tue Dec 06, 2005 4:40 am
Dheibs wrote:by the way, just got my new mic in the mail today...Neumann KMS 105, its soooo incredible
That's a really good on stage mic. I think dave used that as his vocal mic for a long time.
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by Dheibs » Tue Dec 06, 2005 11:52 pm
Trippin Hillbilly wrote:Dheibs wrote:by the way, just got my new mic in the mail today...Neumann KMS 105, its soooo incredible
That's a really good on stage mic. I think dave used that as his vocal mic for a long time.
Yeah, its really an awesome mic. but dave uses a sennheiser now. i dont know why he switched. Neumann makes the best condenser mics ever
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