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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Fri Sep 26, 2003 6:00 pm

"Dropped"

This is a pretty fun song to play, very catchy.

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Fri Sep 26, 2003 6:33 pm

damn its missing the last 45 secs.
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Unread post by Appfro » Fri Sep 26, 2003 7:15 pm

honestly, i wasn't really crazy about it. i like the part btw 0:00 and 0:12, didn't really like the other parts. i just didn't like the way it wasn't continuous at all, it i guess i just have a problem seeing how this could turn into a song w/ vocals. are you planning on doing that? sorry, just being honest
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Unread post by Roastbeef » Fri Sep 26, 2003 7:21 pm

I liked it. I think there are some neat elements there. Try to mix it up a bit though. It does a lot of climbing and descending if you know what I mean. Structure it and it'll be a neat thing to listen to. Also try to include some transitions between the parts. I think it's cool.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Fri Sep 26, 2003 7:40 pm

yeah, im not to crazy about myself either. i could never get it to sound right. honestly, i dont like the part with the power chords. :(

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