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by NoNotThat » Sat Nov 26, 2005 2:45 am
here is something i did the other day
I would appreciate feedback except for "it's too short", because as of right now it's just an idea
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by chosta » Sat Nov 26, 2005 10:45 am
i like it sarah, its chill and its almost got a radiohead vibe from it. the guitar could be a little louder but thats really the only bad thing i can say. i'd love to hear it finished, i actually fiddled with some chords cause i had my guitar when i listened, if youre interested for a harmony part.
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by jaroben » Sun Nov 27, 2005 3:04 am
That'd be a great intro. I can see it turning into something strong and fast paced.. kind of like a stairway to heaven deal.. then ending slow again.
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by NoNotThat » Mon Nov 28, 2005 12:17 am
thanks guys. chossy I'd love to work on it more with you. PM me.
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by Appfro » Mon Nov 28, 2005 10:41 am
the music is awesome. your vocals are good except a few misses on harmonies, but overall really good. the lyrics are really jumbled in the beginning. it's the only part i don't like. i like the last little bit so much better cause you can understand the lyrics and they really jump out at you. i think w/ a little tweaking it would be a very good song.
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by Cor » Mon Nov 28, 2005 9:07 pm
I like it alot. The vocals are beautiful besides a few very minor misses, as Apps said. The lyrics are a little hard to understand, but overall the song gave me chills. It will be sweet once it's finished.
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by NoNotThat » Wed Nov 30, 2005 7:24 pm
thanks guys. I kind of did the harmonies dissonant on purpose, just to make it more interesting. and next time I'll try not to mumble, hehe.
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