ok, got an mp3 of some of my music

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Unread post by mavonw » Sat Nov 12, 2005 3:19 pm

the "gravedigger live" thread reminded me that i did a cover of gravedigger, I should have it up tonight. it was pretty much live...heh...well, i did one take on guitar and one take on vocals..so basically right??..well anyways, ill put it up once i get it. my friends back home are working on mastering the songs right now.

please post some critiques or any comments...thanks

Mark

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Unread post by Coldchillin » Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:34 pm

mavonw wrote:the "gravedigger live" thread reminded me that i did a cover of gravedigger, I should have it up tonight. it was pretty much live...heh...well, i did one take on guitar and one take on vocals..so basically right??..well anyways, ill put it up once i get it. my friends back home are working on mastering the songs right now.

please post some critiques or any comments...thanks

Mark
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Unread post by mavonw » Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:59 pm

I know, i was being sarcastic

here's the gravedigger cover

http://s50.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2M8P ... LQYFD9YQPY

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Unread post by Blake » Sat Nov 12, 2005 7:46 pm

mavonw wrote:I know, i was being sarcastic

here's the gravedigger cover

http://s50.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2M8P ... LQYFD9YQPY
sounded pretty damn good, my only complaint is that the rythm sounded kind of off. other than that....great job :thumbsup:

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Unread post by mavonw » Sun Nov 13, 2005 11:56 am

thank ya thank ya

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Unread post by mavonw » Sun Nov 13, 2005 9:26 pm

any takers..anybody like/dislike? originals specifially

thanks,
Mark

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Unread post by horsmar15 » Mon Nov 14, 2005 9:05 pm

I listened to the orginal. Pretty good voice, but too airy at times which causes you to lose pitch at times. Good crisp recording quality. As for the song itself, I thought it was alright, but the lyrics in the verse didn't seem to flow that well. The chorus was better though.
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Unread post by mattinbeloit » Mon Nov 14, 2005 9:29 pm

You have a very nice voice man, i really enjoyed it, one of the better ones i have heard on this forum, you have a good range and control it very well. The guitar sounded really good too, you sped up a little bit in parts but conpensated for it. good job.

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Unread post by mavonw » Mon Nov 14, 2005 11:47 pm

thanks guys

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