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Unread post by Roastbeef » Wed Sep 24, 2003 8:27 am

eze3484 wrote:why does angelfire consist of the biggest Douche's in the universe?
Ummm, cuz they're free? :roll:

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Unread post by Easy E » Wed Sep 24, 2003 10:14 am

Hey guys i just threw these two together last night and tonight. The instrumental i'm looking for input on where i can go with it (btw i'm using the slap back 1 effect if anyone cares) and the stay or leave cover is just the first two minutes, havent really got the timing down on the next part yet and didnt want to ruin what i thought to be a good first two minutes. Let me know what you guys think.
Cor wrote:I mentioned awhile ago trying to bang this huge near 7 foot woman I know. Hit it last night. I got manhandled, it was sweet.

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Unread post by fatjack » Wed Sep 24, 2003 10:20 am

no link yo
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Unread post by Easy E » Wed Sep 24, 2003 10:24 am

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Unread post by fatjack » Wed Sep 24, 2003 10:24 am

eze3484 wrote:www button
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Unread post by fatjack » Wed Sep 24, 2003 10:29 am

cool man

the instrumental sounded really cool and could definitely be built into something really neat

stay or leave was a good attempt, but i would have been better to hear the whole thing. the playing was kinda strange cuz the fingersqueaks and you hand movements were much louder than the actual notes. i'm hoping you didn't capo on the 7th fret...

and your voice was on key, but it just didn't sound inspired, try to put a little more emotion into it :wink:
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Unread post by Appfro » Wed Sep 24, 2003 11:54 am

the instrumental was pretty cool. i would have liked to hear the delay be a little faster, i don't think it went well w/ the tempo of the song. maybe if the tempo were a little slower or if the delay were a little faster. would have sounded awesome.

stay or leave was pretty decent. your voice sounded good about 80 percent of the time. had some troubles w/ the first high one, but the second came out really well. you have good rhythm, but you weren't really following the rhythm of the song. the original is just a little more smooth, almost like you came in on the beat and i believe dave hits the first note right before the beat everytime. just play w/ the song.

good stuff, hope to hear more. i wanna hear that original when it's finished.

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Unread post by Easy E » Wed Sep 24, 2003 1:35 pm

why does angelfire consist of the biggest Douche's in the universe?
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Unread post by Appfro » Wed Sep 24, 2003 7:09 pm

eze3484 wrote:why does angelfire consist of the biggest Douche's in the universe?
they'll have to fight over the award w/ john edwards

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Unread post by Bedurndurn » Wed Sep 24, 2003 7:10 pm

The guy who "talks" to dead people? He's gotta be the bigger douche.

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Unread post by fatjack » Wed Sep 24, 2003 7:13 pm

Bedurndurn wrote:The guy who "talks" to dead people? He's gotta be the bigger douche.
i LOVE that episode, saw it last night :D
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Unread post by Bedurndurn » Wed Sep 24, 2003 7:16 pm

Now that I think about it, why is douche an insult? For a douche to be a bad thing that'd be like saying, "I like stinky vaginas."

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Unread post by fatjack » Wed Sep 24, 2003 7:21 pm

Bedurndurn wrote:Now that I think about it, why is douche an insult? For a douche to be a bad thing that'd be like saying, "I like stinky vaginas."
ha!! you said "stinky vaginas"!!

i guess it just sounds really "insultious"
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Unread post by Appfro » Wed Sep 24, 2003 9:13 pm

fatjack wrote:
Bedurndurn wrote:The guy who "talks" to dead people? He's gotta be the bigger douche.
i LOVE that episode, saw it last night :D
i was hoping someone would get it


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Unread post by Easy E » Fri Sep 26, 2003 12:37 am

yeah i saw that just before i wrote that, glad you guys picked up on it. Im also drunk.
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