Dream I Killed God. Critique plz.

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SingLike_Dave
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Dream I Killed God. Critique plz.

Unread post by SingLike_Dave » Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:02 pm

http://media.putfile.com/Dream-I-Killed-God-Audio

Tell me what you think? (Not on lyrics.Just added that for effect. Guitar wise)

Basically just the intro.
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Unread post by ghillie » Wed Nov 02, 2005 12:21 am

"<i>Dreamed</i> I Killed God", if you wanna get anal about it.

I almost thought that buzzing at the beginning was an intentional effect... that could've sounded cool.

Your voice sounded pretty good, but it would've sounded better without certain words drawn out the way they were.

Overall, good job. Now you need to put 'Minarets' before it :)
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Unread post by SingLike_Dave » Wed Nov 02, 2005 7:21 am

Its actually the B string at the first. buzz with the E powerchord.
Was gonna re-record it but.. it sounded sweet so.

thanks dude ;)
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