non-dave song from fattyJ (THIS TIME IT'S AN ORIGINAL!!)

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non-dave song from fattyJ (THIS TIME IT'S AN ORIGINAL!!)

Unread post by fatjack » Sun Sep 21, 2003 8:06 am

here's a song that me and hayden came up with thursday afternoon, it can be a tad repetitive but the real point of the song was an experiment in guitar harmony. enjoy.

http://artists.iuma.com/site-bin/streammp3.m3u?541121
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Unread post by mbgreen » Sun Sep 21, 2003 8:16 am

I just gave a listen...it sounded really cool. I liked the lead stuff a lot. Nice and mellow. And the title was neat-o. Now just come up with some sappy lyrics, and you've got an instant hit.
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Unread post by fatjack » Sun Sep 21, 2003 8:16 am

mbgreen wrote: Now just come up with some sappy lyrics, and you've got an instant hit.
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Unread post by isaac » Sun Sep 21, 2003 8:40 am

pretty slick stuff, josh. i dug it a lot, even if it did sort of drag on towards the end there. ;) sounds like a LOTR song...sort of. okay. maybe not.

hehe. the guitar harmonies were great. there were some things that i didn't quite like how the harmonies worked out, but it's better than anything i can do so there goes that opinion. :P anyway, now you gotta throw some vocal harmonies in! yeah!

haha. anyway. good stuff. ;)
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Unread post by fatjack » Sun Sep 21, 2003 8:43 am

isaac wrote:pretty slick stuff, josh. i dug it a lot, even if it did sort of drag on towards the end there. ;) sounds like a LOTR song...sort of. okay. maybe not.

hehe. the guitar harmonies were great. there were some things that i didn't quite like how the harmonies worked out, but it's better than anything i can do so there goes that opinion. :P anyway, now you gotta throw some vocal harmonies in! yeah!

haha. anyway. good stuff. ;)
i was kinda thinkin it sounded like something that would fit well on a movie soundtrack :D

and i can dig what your were saying on the harmonies, i kinda fudged one of em up real bad
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Unread post by isaac » Sun Sep 21, 2003 8:46 am

as i heard. ;)

anyway, yeah...for it to be on a movie soundtrack you need some war drums though. then it would be complete! bwahwwahahahaha!
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Unread post by Appfro » Sun Sep 21, 2003 9:12 am

listening as i type. God i hate this buffer shit, how do i dl your stuff instead of streaming, i hate streaming. awesome harmies. wish i could figure that stuff out. yea, last one was a bit...oops. but still sounded good.

i like the verse (or whatever you're calling it) im not sure about the change, there seemed to be a rhythm change of some kind right after the harmonics, but maybe i just stopped paying attn for a sec. anyway, good stuff. i like all the lead stuff, sounded really good.

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Unread post by fatjack » Sun Sep 21, 2003 9:13 am

you can just go to my site if you wanna download
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Unread post by ticohans » Sun Sep 21, 2003 2:07 pm

the stream isnt working for me. what's the name of your iuma site?

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Unread post by ticohans » Sun Sep 21, 2003 2:07 pm

nvmnd found it

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Unread post by borocks » Sun Sep 21, 2003 8:52 pm

sounds good man, you really got the skills.

It'd be cool to put some vocals in there and may add some cool effect. That'd be really cool
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Unread post by firedancer86 » Mon Sep 22, 2003 5:51 am

as I have told you before Josh...very cool piece...innovative little move with the 6/8 and 2 chords ;)

catchy and fun...keep working on stuff like this :)
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