I used garageband to record this song - had quite a bit of fun in the process. i'm on vocals, electric, acoustic, and bass guitars. the mixing's probably shit - i'm looking more for critique on style and overall quality of the song. thanks guys!
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worldofsweetness
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you have a good voice (although some of your harmonies were awkward) and are solid on the acoustic guitar. i dont really like that poppy style though, sounded too much like a WB theme song.
the first trill you had on the electric sounded good, but the rest of your fills became rather out of place. they were too short and the last note was usually played too staccato. dont be afraid to have those fills overlap with the next phrase of the melody. stopping them short like you did just makes it seem like you systematically added them (in other words, for the fuck of it).
the first trill you had on the electric sounded good, but the rest of your fills became rather out of place. they were too short and the last note was usually played too staccato. dont be afraid to have those fills overlap with the next phrase of the melody. stopping them short like you did just makes it seem like you systematically added them (in other words, for the fuck of it).
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