Braclet- My new work in progress

[mattinbeloit]

Ok this is my new work in progress and it is only half way done. It's called Braclet. I wrote it last week when the girl I have loved all through college pretty much told me she didn't love me and just wanted to be friends (yaya i know cry me a fucking river....). I was in my room just strumming around on a mellody i had and looked down at the braclet around my wrist that she had made for me a year back and it sort of just became the symbol everything and the song took off. Like i said it's only half way done, ill write more when i'm in a happy mood because i want it to have a happy ending. I'm taking a recording class here and my teacher let me borrow one of his nice Neumann mics so i have been recording things all day and decided to give this a try. (By the way this is in an open tuning and i'm plam mutting the whole thing.). So tell me what you guys think, this is just a strait up recording i have not edited it at all, sounds preatty good quality wise except the fact that this file is mp3....
http://s65.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3RZX ... S1MY2SBTIW

[djs488]

Intro and, consequently, the rest of the song, sounds very no such thingish, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. I think you could use some variety in the your strumming patterns and even a little more in your progression. Voice is darn good though. Keep strummin!

[mattinbeloit]

Intro and, consequently, the rest of the song, sounds very no such thingish, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. I think you could use some variety in the your strumming patterns and even a little more in your progression. Voice is darn good though. Keep strummin!

Ya I'm looking for a way to spice up the song, it is too boaring (which is not necessarily a bad thing) so I'm still working on it. I'm glad you liked my voice, ive been working on that more than anything....

[GSR]

cool name.

[globex]

Very cool. I dont think its boring.

What does the recording set up look like, the quality is really good.

[mattinbeloit]

Very cool. I dont think its boring.

What does the recording set up look like, the quality is really good.

I borrowed a Neumann TLM-103 from my recording teacher and hooked that up to a Beringer mixer and fed the mixer to my sound card, i did a track for the guitar and track for vocals. I was basicaly just playing with the mic and decided to record what i had of the song, i have not edited it at all, its a real sweet mic and is quiet as hell, i was impressed.