A Blues Jam. Critique please!

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A Blues Jam. Critique please!

Unread post by gumbomadness » Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:55 am

Ok, so my keyboard playing friend is walking the bassline on his keyboard WHILE comping chords and soloing. 8-)

I'm playing guitar.

The drums are looped.
No layering or anything was done.

Critique please. Alot of people say the drums throw it off..
Anyway, any comments are welcome!

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Unread post by Batstone » Mon Oct 03, 2005 12:26 pm

needs more cowbell
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Mon Oct 03, 2005 1:51 pm

:cry:
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Oct 03, 2005 6:45 pm

Great stuff man. Honestly. You have improved a ton since I last heard you. (You had some "green carpet" song or something.)

But I seriously had a great time just chillin' to that. You're really developing your own style, and it's sounding great. You had some great phrases in there. I think fatjack may be more suitable to hardcore critique, but I thought it was fantastic - good luck in the future, man. :)
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Unread post by i am sam2 » Mon Oct 03, 2005 6:56 pm

very nice. like the little saints go marching in part you fit it in perfectly.
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Unread post by Alazais » Mon Oct 03, 2005 7:14 pm

I enjoy it very much. Great job. I just hit a bowl came in and listened to this... It's a great song.

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Unread post by gumbomadness » Mon Oct 03, 2005 7:38 pm

thanks guys. alot of people told me it was flat out hard to listen to.

i guess some music might be just for musicians.
tragically poetic, and ironic at the same time, isnt it?

I'll have more up for all soon! Thanks!
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Unread post by worldofsweetness » Tue Oct 04, 2005 12:11 am

I really enjoyed listening to that man. Great stuff! :D
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Tue Oct 04, 2005 11:16 am

thanks
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