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dmbguitar718 · Unread post by **dmbguitar718** » Wed Sep 03, 2003 5:50 pm

http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/mr_pa ... cInnis.mp3

Let me know what you think. I messed up at some parts.

(It's the first song I've recorded with vocals)

AdamCU81 · Unread post by **AdamCU81** » Wed Sep 03, 2003 6:17 pm

Overall good. The guitar is solid, and your voice is a good kind of unique. The timing was a little off in parts, but that's no big deal as you can just spend more time to get it perfect. My biggest concern is that you may not have the right range to sing the low parts of the song. I'm the same way myself....as dave is getting older and his voice is mellowing out/lowering, I find it harder and harder to sing his new stuff. You can try playing with a capo a few frets up so you won't have to sing so low, or you can just work at stretching your voice over time with a lot of practice. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more in the future.

-adam

geekmug · Unread post by **geekmug** » Wed Sep 03, 2003 11:52 pm

This might sound a little rude, but I am guessing you are pretty young? I don't want to insult you, but you sound about 14.. the guitar work is great if you are that old :-p .. if you aren't.. your voice needs some work. :mrgreen:

Appfro · Unread post by **Appfro** » Thu Sep 04, 2003 3:35 am

listening as i type

solid guitar playing. maybe a little off on some of your rhythm, but not too bad. not really the beat, just the beat of the song. you missed where you were supposed to change the chords in the place. so your rhythm was never really off, just the actualy palying of the song was a little off at times.

solid vocals in the beginning. i agree w/ geekmug, you sound a little young, but hey, you can't help when you were born. the second was a little raw, but its hard to jump an octive like that. so keep practicing

id say decent cover. what was the little noises at the end, that was kinda cool. to improve id say don't be afraid to wail, especially in those last parts of the song, you can't sing that high and hold your voice in like it soundsl ike you're doing. also, you should play the song along w/ dave a couple more times. you got off a little, especially there in the end. but keep it up, practice practice practice.

dmbguitar718 · Unread post by **dmbguitar718** » Thu Sep 04, 2003 6:04 pm

Hey thanks guys.

I am young, I turned 15 in July. My voice still isn't really developed, and thats why I can't really sing.

So thanks for the comments, I really appreciate it. (Even if the were negative)

skilly · Unread post by **skilly** » Fri Sep 05, 2003 3:14 am

nothing angelfire works for me plz help i want to hear the angelfie stuff

gravedigger · Unread post by **gravedigger** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 9:55 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:www.angelfire.com/musicals/mr_pat3/Grav ... cInnis.mp3

Let me know what you think. I messed up at some parts.

(It's the first song I've recorded with vocals)

hey man, that was very good. your only 15? woah. I can tell you have a good ear and feel for rhythm and timing. very nice work. you must've been playing for a few years now though right?

i-am-me · Unread post by **i-am-me** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 10:27 pm

Yea, some changes were a little off. BUT! i have to say that the guitar work was great. I thought it was fantastic. Yea i'm turning 14 in october, got the same problem with the voice. Damn that puberty shit.... haha. But that's really good. Give us some more!

DMBFan63 · Unread post by **DMBFan63** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 12:52 am

Grave, if you think that he's good for 15, you should hear me play:-p I play like non stop, so

i'm 15 as well.. turning 16 in may..

DMBFan63 · Unread post by **DMBFan63** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 12:57 am

Oh, sorry to sound rude though, it was a great cover man, just yea, need some devolping in the voice..

everydayDMBfan_18 · Unread post by **everydayDMBfan_18** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 1:01 am

Hmm...little full of yourself berwick? :p

Appfro · Unread post by **Appfro** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 2:58 am

everydayDMBfan_18 wrote:Hmm...little full of yourself berwick? :p

i second that notion

DMBFan63 · Unread post by **DMBFan63** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 5:42 pm

sorry, I forgot to put the special face at the end, to note its a joke
Grave, if you think that he's good for 15, you should hear me play:-p I play like non stop, so i'm 15 as well.. turning 16 in may..

everydayDMBfan_18 · Unread post by **everydayDMBfan_18** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 6:40 pm

"Special" face? we have we have retarded faces now? :p

Appfro · Unread post by **Appfro** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 7:30 pm

the face makes all the difference in the world

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