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Trippin Hillbilly · Unread post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Sat Sep 06, 2003 5:08 pm

Hey all

this isnt great, one of those i played a couple of times then threw into the corner...not sure if i should do something with it...no lyrics yet..

tell me what you think please.. i know there's a few screw ups in the intro..

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Appfro · Unread post by **Appfro** » Sat Sep 06, 2003 5:32 pm

easy little prgression, but it sounds good. what no words yet?

that's my favorite part. in the second part, i don't know if it's your verse or what, but it starts at about 40 sec, i don't really like the second chord of the progression, i don't know it'sjust kinda wierd i guess. other than that i like it. sounds good, sounds basic, nothing crazy, just good solid stuff. can't wait to hear the words.

Trippin Hillbilly · Unread post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Sat Sep 06, 2003 5:38 pm

thanks apps...yeah it's really simple, kinda the mood i was in really came through on this one..
Messin around with alternate tunings..lotsa fun
thanks for the reply

isaac · Unread post by **isaac** » Sat Sep 06, 2003 5:49 pm

minimalistic approach is never bad.

i think this would be great solo and with a full band, just because it allows for a lot of room for creativity. pretty soothing...gives me a mood like bowa does. the music says something about being around friends and having a good time, cherishing that time as it is, and breathing life one step at a time.

the song became a little repetive sometimes, but that's because it hasn't been fleshed out into a full song. the different parts are great, though.

can't wait 'till you throw in some lyrics and your awesome vocals.

Trippin Hillbilly · Unread post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Sat Sep 06, 2003 6:12 pm

isaac wrote:minimalistic approach is never bad. i think this would be great solo and with a full band, just because it allows for a lot of room for creativity. pretty soothing...gives me a mood like bowa does. the music says something about being around friends and having a good time, cherishing that time as it is, and breathing life one step at a time.

the song became a little repetive sometimes, but that's because it hasn't been fleshed out into a full song. the different parts are great, though.

can't wait 'till you throw in some lyrics and your awesome vocals.

ha! thanks man..made my day..

it is very repititive because i tried to extend the parts a bit so that i could write some lyrics to it...while im on the train..on the way to work...doesn't seem to be working tho...DAMMIT!!

aight peace..

fatjack · Unread post by **fatjack** » Sat Sep 06, 2003 7:48 pm

boo! angelfire!

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Sat Sep 06, 2003 11:11 pm

cool...nice and simple, but that is always effective...diggin that Coldplay tuning huh?

fatjack · Unread post by **fatjack** » Sat Sep 06, 2003 11:24 pm

sounded good, there were just a few mis-picked notes in the intro... now isng damn it!

Appfro · Unread post by **Appfro** » Sat Sep 06, 2003 11:41 pm

fatjack wrote:sounded good, there were just a few mis-picked notes in the intro... now isng damn it!

ha, its sing!!! not isng!!! i got you i got you i got you. now i know that technically you didn't spell it wrong, you only mistyped it. but that's the closest im going to get so ill celebrate.

mbgreen · Unread post by **mbgreen** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 2:10 am

By no means am I attempting to downplay your skill as a guitarist, but your voice is your best attribute, and I'd really like to hear this piece with a melody. Even if they lyrics dont make sense. (Sometimes those are best anyway.) The progression sounds good...I dig the build up at about 3:00. Work on it...its sounding good.

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