my first original

[rollmebackagain]

here's a little riff I made up today... I added some background crowd noise so it would sound like i was a rock star or something... tell me what you think... also, anyone's invited to write some words to it and add them to it... in fact, i encourage you, please do!

http://s6.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2YU75 ... E6RGWJW71G

[CBalvarez]

That's not too bad for a first man, I can tell listening to it tho that you play alot of dave, but keep experimenting with original shit man, it will help give you a more unique sound. I hate that no one responds to or ignores peoples original songs on here, I love listening to shit people wrote. if you want you can check out my originals at http://www.tallboys.org keep it up man

[katie]

that's a great swing on the bass notes up to the higher notes. the audience, is a great addition...hehe...

you make it seem so easy.