When the World Ends Full Band w/o Vocals

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When the World Ends Full Band w/o Vocals

Unread post by Jophus » Thu Jul 14, 2005 7:39 pm

Hey, This is a cover of When the World Ends that I recorded in my home studio. I played all the instruments on it but I have someone else who will sing it. You may remember some of my other posts like Typical Situation and #41. We have a new Typical Situation Comin...PLEASE CRITIQUE

P.S. (dont mind the pause in the middle, its as if someone was singing there.

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Unread post by sk8r » Thu Jul 14, 2005 8:07 pm

sounded very tight. i was def sitting in my seat rocking back and forth to it, parts of it even sounded computerized to me. infact alot of parts but yea. very nice.

post with vox when its done please
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Unread post by Beauford33 » Thu Jul 14, 2005 8:26 pm

Very Nice!! :thumbsup:

Perfect in my mind, just needs vocals.
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Unread post by Jophus » Thu Jul 14, 2005 8:29 pm

dont worry guys nothing computerized...theonly thing was the piano was done with an electric keyboard....real sax bass guitar and drums

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Unread post by Beauford33 » Thu Jul 14, 2005 8:41 pm

Actually, on second listen, the kick drum on the chorus sounds rushed. Not the kick on the down, but the one on the "ah" of 1 and 3. You are giving it too much of a straight feel. You keep the verse more swung and liad back but the chorus is too solid. Make sure you play the chorus teh same was as the verse. Nice and laid back.
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Unread post by carter29 » Thu Jul 14, 2005 9:08 pm

yeah bass drum is rushed is second chorus especially

sounds amazing though

nice sounding snare drum
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Unread post by mdel21 » Fri Jul 15, 2005 10:27 am

awesome job

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Re: When the World Ends Full Band w/o Vocals

Unread post by jellyfish » Fri Jul 15, 2005 10:49 am

Jophus wrote:Hey, This is a cover of When the World Ends that I recorded in my home studio. I played all the instruments on it but I have someone else who will sing it. You may remember some of my other posts like Typical Situation and #41. We have a new Typical Situation Comin...PLEASE CRITIQUE

P.S. (dont mind the pause in the middle, its as if someone was singing there.

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http://www.vradio.com/cfm-enduser/mp3do ... 20ends.mp3
I liked it... Didn't notice any rushing in the chorus with the drums. But, Im not trained for that stuff. Very Nice.

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Unread post by i like tictacs » Fri Jul 15, 2005 11:02 am

Where's the bass fills? :-p

pretty solid!
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Unread post by Jophus » Fri Jul 15, 2005 11:21 am

I NEED YOUR SUPPORT! DAVE MATTHEWS TRIBUTE BAND MASSACHUSETTS.....ANYONE AND EVERYONE WHO THINKS WE SHOULD BECOME ONE SAY YES ON THIS FORUM

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Unread post by i like tictacs » Fri Jul 15, 2005 11:43 am

You guys have talent but the last thing the NE area needs is another DMB tribute band. Try some originals!
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Unread post by Jophus » Fri Jul 15, 2005 9:45 pm

We plan to start with shows that are like half DAVE and half originals, you know play stuff people like and slowly intoduce your stuff to them

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Unread post by Jophus » Sun Jul 17, 2005 2:23 pm

CMON PEOPLE GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK HAHAHA

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