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This isn't a dave cover... BUT LISTEN AND RESPOND ANYWAY!

Unread post by fatjack » Sat Aug 30, 2003 9:19 pm

here we go, worked on this, arranged it a few hours ago, recorded a few minutes ago, tell me what you think...

click on it and it will take you to my site, the song is called la la la and is on the first page that shows up. DON'T RIGHT CLICK AND SAVE!

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Unread post by Pickles » Sat Aug 30, 2003 9:21 pm

i like it :)
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Unread post by isaac » Sat Aug 30, 2003 9:30 pm

shane wrote:i like it :)
dittofied.

and one of the most creative titles i have ever heard. ;)

hehe, but seriously, seems like it was a fun song. :) i like it a lot...solid playing, interesting arrangement. kick ass!
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Unread post by fatjack » Sat Aug 30, 2003 9:30 pm

isaac wrote:
shane wrote:i like it :)
dittofied.

and one of the most creative titles i have ever heard. ;)
thank you *fancily tips hat*
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Unread post by isaac » Sat Aug 30, 2003 9:31 pm

ooh. what kind of hat? tophat? is it blue? you should get a blue top hat that says la la la and walk around acting pimp. yes.
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Unread post by fatjack » Sat Aug 30, 2003 9:33 pm

isaac wrote:ooh. what kind of hat? tophat? is it blue? you should get a blue top hat that says la la la and walk around acting pimp. yes.
good idea...except it would be one of those small brimmed hats with a big feather on it!
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Unread post by isaac » Sat Aug 30, 2003 9:35 pm

oooh! from what bird though? it should be a phoenix. cuz that'd bit pimp, too. tizzight, and all that shiznit.
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Unread post by fatjack » Sat Aug 30, 2003 9:37 pm

isaac wrote:oooh! from what bird though? it should be a phoenix. cuz that'd bit pimp, too. tizzight, and all that shiznit.
but wouldn't my hat catch on fire?! and yes it would be cool...

with all these replys, people are gonna think my song is real kickass or something! :D
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Unread post by isaac » Sat Aug 30, 2003 9:40 pm

bah! *refrains from replying*

but then again, it is a kickass song! ;) better than my clip.
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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Sep 01, 2003 7:29 pm

i was wondering why people were just saying i like it and not giving you any detailed feedback...now i know why. i really don't have any feedback for you. i liked it. if i could pick one part over another, i liked the stuff b/w 1:40 and around 2:20 (not exactly sure if those are the times) MORE than i liked the beginning and the end, but i liked that too. but really good stuff.

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Unread post by fatjack » Mon Sep 01, 2003 8:06 pm

Appsoldier wrote:i was wondering why people were just saying i like it and not giving you any detailed feedback...now i know why. i really don't have any feedback for you. i liked it. if i could pick one part over another, i liked the stuff b/w 1:40 and around 2:20 (not exactly sure if those are the times) MORE than i liked the beginning and the end, but i liked that too. but really good stuff.
thanks apps, i was hoping you would give me your thoughts :D
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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Sep 01, 2003 9:05 pm

yea, i appologize for the wait, been gone all weekend. i would never leave you hanging on purpose :D

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Unread post by Lexington Steele » Fri Sep 05, 2003 2:45 am

good stuff bro. . . i liked it alot

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Unread post by fatjack » Fri Sep 05, 2003 2:47 am

Lexington Steele wrote:good stuff bro. . . i liked it alot

Lex
yay! someone beside isaac, apps, shane and fire responded! thanks lex :D
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Unread post by isaac » Fri Sep 05, 2003 2:52 am

:( what's wrong with me responding?
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