Damien Rice-Volcano cover plz cr..

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Damien Rice-Volcano cover plz cr..

Unread post by Swede » Tue Jul 05, 2005 4:51 pm

this is a easy song to play and i still fuck up with the guitar sometimes.

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Unread post by Appfro » Tue Jul 05, 2005 9:32 pm

sorry it took me so long to get back to you. i was having a hard time hearing it so i had to go somewhere where i could get speakers.

ok, your guitar playing is fine and your voice is great. fits the song very well.

two problems. one small the other big. the small one, too much reverb. i don't know if you added it after the recording or not, but there was way too much.

the other problem, the big one was rhythm. you're all over the place. you even change time signatures at times it seems. my suggestion would be to play w/ the recording more.

dude you really do have a great voice. probably the most underrated on the boards.

and TURN THE VOLUME UP ON YOUR RECORDING NEXT TIME DAMMIT ;)

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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Tue Jul 05, 2005 10:53 pm

The guitar part was played wrong. i think the voice could be good with some more work. keep it up
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

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Unread post by thejoe » Wed Jul 06, 2005 12:37 am

its a cover, he can play the guitar part however he wants
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Unread post by Buck » Wed Jul 06, 2005 3:53 pm

I like to play this over the progression...(looped on my Dl-4)

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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Fri Jul 08, 2005 7:27 pm

Not bad at all, Swede. Interesting take on the song. You really have your own voice. I must add that your voice is much better at some points than others. At some points it sounds almost professional and at other points it sounds like you're trying way too hard and it's going to embarassingly crack at any second. I think this is a sign that with the right kind of practice, you could really have a great voice. Guitar was good. Fell out of rhythm at points, but overall decent. Thanks for posting.
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Unread post by Swede » Sun Jul 10, 2005 2:06 am

thx guys for listening to the song,

will remember the things you said to my next recordning.. thx again
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