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Unread post by wayward_blue » Thu Jun 23, 2005 10:18 am

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Unread post by Kahn » Thu Jun 23, 2005 10:28 am

The first thing I noticed was that your voice needs work. It sounds like you're sing-talking. Guitar line was ok. Not any mess-ups I caught as far as guitar goes. Keep posting. :thumbsup:

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Unread post by wayward_blue » Thu Jun 23, 2005 10:57 am

Thanks for the feedback, yeah I know the vocals on there were like that I did the vocals in one shot and I can't be too loud when I do them cause I live in an apartment with paper thin walls and the neighbors have already gotten on me for being to loud... oops. I'll see what I can do to about it.

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