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Unread post by Pickles » Mon Aug 25, 2003 8:59 pm

i just wanna know what you think about how i play the verse mainly, i threw in the chorus for fun. i cant play the 16th note triplet strums well but im trying lol. youll notice thats why it might sound weird.

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reeeeeaaally need some input :?
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Unread post by everydayDMBfan_18 » Mon Aug 25, 2003 10:47 pm

Once you get a little deeper into the chorus it sounds pretty damn good. The verse reminds me of some dave jam...I wish I could remember what though :\
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Unread post by Roastbeef » Tue Aug 26, 2003 8:09 am

Decent progressions. You just need to clean up the playing a bit. Sounded pretty cool.
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Unread post by Pickles » Tue Aug 26, 2003 2:11 pm

i know i need to clean it up.. i just learned it before i recorded it... i think it sounds awesome though.. hehe.

honestly though people, 50 views, 2 replies? what the crap! i really need people to tell me what they think!
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Unread post by Appfro » Tue Aug 26, 2003 2:13 pm

ive been trying to download it since you put it up and its always suspended. don't take it down, im going to try again when i get home cause i wanna hear it
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Unread post by Pickles » Tue Aug 26, 2003 2:16 pm

i just tried it.... works.... hmm..
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Unread post by Roastbeef » Tue Aug 26, 2003 2:16 pm

shane wrote:honestly though people, 50 views, 2 replies? what the crap! i really need people to tell me what they think!
Yeah. When hosting on Angelfire, the number of thread views is not necessarily equal to the number of people that have actually been able to listen to it. :roll:
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Unread post by Pickles » Tue Aug 26, 2003 2:16 pm

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shane wrote:honestly though people, 50 views, 2 replies? what the crap! i really need people to tell me what they think!
Yeah. When hosting on Angelfire, the number of thread views is not necessarily equal to the number of people that have actually been able to listen to it. :roll:
ok how about this - has anyone besides AppSoldier had trouble?
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Unread post by Appfro » Tue Aug 26, 2003 2:18 pm

shane wrote:i just tried it.... works.... hmm..
im lying to you man, ive been trying for days. im at work now so i can't do it. but i will when i get home.

and you're not the only one. look at most of the posts. everyone usually only gets 4 or 5 replies.
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Unread post by Roastbeef » Tue Aug 26, 2003 2:20 pm

shane wrote:ok how about this - has anyone besides AppSoldier had trouble?
I heard it, and I commented. There's really not a lot to go on here, and maybe that's also why there's only been a few replies. It's groovy man. But again, it's kinda crude and lacks any structure in terms of it being a song. Work on it. That's all I can say.
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Unread post by Roastbeef » Tue Aug 26, 2003 2:24 pm

Appsoldier wrote:and you're not the only one. look at most of the posts. everyone usually only gets 4 or 5 replies.
Apps is right. Have a look at my thread:

http://www.dmbtabs.com/boards/viewtopic.php?t=4589

It's the same sort of thing. A snippet of a song idea. I only received three responses and I think it sounds awesome too ;). Anyway, if you're looking for confirmation that this thing has potential, than yes, it does. Again, keep working on it.
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Unread post by Appfro » Tue Aug 26, 2003 11:57 pm

ok checked it out. if i can pin the parts i liked and liked less, the intro, liked less, the part after that, i thought was awesome. it was a cool easy little progression that really really worked. the intro could be good if cleaned up, maybe tweaked a little. i know it was just a little clip, but maybe work on rhythm a little too. it has some potential definetly.
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Unread post by mbgreen » Wed Aug 27, 2003 12:51 am

shane wrote:honestly though people, 50 views, 2 replies? what the crap! i really need people to tell me what they think!
*Holding back any and all comments on Shane's stuff until he grows some balls and posts a song all the way through. :)

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Unread post by Bedurndurn » Wed Aug 27, 2003 1:20 am

It sounds kinda neat. But a whole song would be better. Hell, even a song that doesn't end because you trimmed the wavefile would be nice. :D
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Unread post by Pickles » Wed Aug 27, 2003 1:03 pm

Bedurndurn wrote:It sounds kinda neat. But a whole song would be better. Hell, even a song that doesn't end because you trimmed the wavefile would be nice. :D
dude.... your avatar... is so cool... lol... :lol: ... anyway the reason i was wondering is because im thinking abuot seeing if my youth groups praise band will think about playing that song next week... i get to play once more and were trying to do some new stuff... maybe ill play the whole song all the way through before then, but im really busy today.. well have to see
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