The First Day of My Life

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The First Day of My Life

Unread post by mdel21 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:19 pm

http://s35.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3KBO ... W9T8J3EXCE

Listen to it. If it sucks, I apologize. If you like it, you're welcome.

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Unread post by i am sam2 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:31 pm

holy shit those first/main chords are...damn that sounds almost exactly like a little progression i play sometimes...

voice sounds like the weezer guy...rivers is his name?
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Unread post by mdel21 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:34 pm

rivers cuomo

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Unread post by Beauford33 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 8:36 pm

I personally like the strumming pattern on the original, but these works. Your voice struggles at times, but not too bad. Overall a good job, I really like this song and you did it justice.
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Unread post by mdel21 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 8:55 pm

I just kinda did it for fun. He fingerpicks and I'm just not good at it.

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Unread post by Beauford33 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 8:56 pm

mdel21 wrote:I just kinda did it for fun. He fingerpicks and I'm just not good at it.
Well, just the rythm is different. More or less two step-ish.
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Unread post by whatshername » Tue Jun 14, 2005 2:10 pm

toppppppppp

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wow..i never thought i'd do that. i'm really bored today.
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Unread post by mdel21 » Tue Jun 14, 2005 2:10 pm

did you ever listen to this yourself?

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Unread post by whatshername » Tue Jun 14, 2005 2:12 pm

yes sir, i like it. i think you've improved from your last cover that i've heard. no lie.
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Unread post by mdel21 » Sat Jun 18, 2005 2:06 pm

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Unread post by Appfro » Sat Jun 18, 2005 3:54 pm

just got back, haven't been around

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Unread post by Appfro » Sun Jun 19, 2005 9:19 am

guitar was really good. good rhythm. voice needs to be worked on. it's not terrible but you were all over the place at times. good job though

thanks for hooking me up w/ the song

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Unread post by mdel21 » Sun Jun 19, 2005 9:33 am

I'm not much of a singer. I'm seeing a little progression over the last year, I mainly don't practice enough. Part of it is a mix of being scared to let loose and trying to hard to sound like the artist.

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Unread post by Appfro » Sun Jun 19, 2005 10:01 am

yea man. just practice. you have potential and your playing is already good and you can play and sing at the same time so you're over half way there.

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