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The Dreaming Tree. Bass and guitar. (HTTP DOWNLOAD) FIXED

Unread post by i like tictacs » Fri Jun 10, 2005 2:09 pm

OK, here is The Dreaming Tree. I am by no means a guitar player and I don't claim I am :p . I wish I knew how to compress the guitar track better, but alas I dont. But take it for what it's worth, it's my first 'full' solo piece that I've used guitar and bass together on.

http://www.michaelpatrickkelley.com/media/dtfinal.mp3
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Unread post by Beauford33 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 3:17 pm

My only suggestion is that you should do more then keep time with the guitar. Dave does more then just downstrokes on the 1.
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Unread post by i like tictacs » Fri Jun 10, 2005 3:19 pm

Beauford33 wrote:My only suggestion is that you should do more then keep time with the guitar. Dave does more then just downstrokes on the 1.
Eh, I wanted to showcase the bass. I'll take note for when i go to finish it. Thanks :)

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Unread post by Beauford33 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 3:21 pm

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Beauford33 wrote:My only suggestion is that you should do more then keep time with the guitar. Dave does more then just downstrokes on the 1.
Eh, I wanted to showcase the bass. I'll take note for when i go to finish it. Thanks :)
Oh yea, the bass was right on. Great Job on that.
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Unread post by sk8r » Fri Jun 10, 2005 3:46 pm

i have to say im really digging what you have done so far. the bass sounds really damn good and the guitar is fairly well done. im not sure if the timing is just slightyl off at parts or if its just my bad ears but overall i like it alot!
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Unread post by Beauford33 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 5:51 pm

sk8rdude12000 wrote:i have to say im really digging what you have done so far. the bass sounds really damn good and the guitar is fairly well done. im not sure if the timing is just slightyl off at parts or if its just my bad ears but overall i like it alot!
Im sure its your ears.
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Unread post by i like tictacs » Fri Jun 10, 2005 9:07 pm

First post updated.
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Unread post by i like tictacs » Fri Jun 10, 2005 9:25 pm

Nevermind me, got it
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Unread post by i like tictacs » Fri Jun 10, 2005 10:49 pm

I just triple posted. My deepest apologies :?

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Unread post by Beauford33 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 10:59 pm

It is your thread, it doesnt matter.
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Unread post by GSR » Fri Jun 10, 2005 11:07 pm

first of all. fuck you and your flea.

the bass sounds nasty as hell. the guitar sounds great sound quality wise, but beauford is right: it sounds a little boring with just the down strum.

but you're a bassist, so fuck that.

your timing was pretty on the whole time, cept i think i heard one note that was like a 1/4 second fast or something.

GSR gives it a strong "kick ass."
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Unread post by worldofsweetness » Tue Jun 14, 2005 12:05 am

Bass kicks ass, you build a nice groove for the song - i was totally singing along with it. solid job man!
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Unread post by i like tictacs » Tue Jun 14, 2005 6:16 pm

Thanks. I wish I could play geetar a little better though
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Unread post by myxomatosis » Thu Jun 16, 2005 9:21 pm

nice job on the bass.. how long have you been playing?
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Unread post by Kahn » Thu Jun 16, 2005 9:29 pm

Beauford33 wrote:My only suggestion is that you should do more then keep time with the guitar. Dave does more then just downstrokes on the 1.
Go listen to BTCS again :wink:

Tictacs got it right. That sounds awesome. I would love to jam with a good bassist like you.

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