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Unread post by borocks » Thu May 12, 2005 12:14 pm

My drummer came up with some lyrics the other week and I got around to do a recording today.
This has worked out pretty fine I think. It's two guitar and two vocal tracks.

Give it a try and tell me what you think, please

http://www.k-web.ch/41/taufahrt.mp3


Thanks a lot,
Bo
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Unread post by borocks » Fri May 13, 2005 6:00 am

c'mon dudes
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Unread post by GreyBlueAnt » Fri May 13, 2005 11:21 am

Something about the melody sounds familiar. Maybe it's the chorus.
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Unread post by Easy E » Fri May 13, 2005 12:25 pm

maybe I lost something in the translation but the part where you say "the jelly in my pocketbook smells like a grass stain" I can totally relate

but seriously, not bad, the first guitar part is kind of bleh but the solo work is good. I could groove to this
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Unread post by borocks » Sun May 15, 2005 5:40 am

Thanks for listening guys

eric, what do you mean by kind of bleh - too monotonous?
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Unread post by mangold » Sun May 15, 2005 10:57 am

i cant understand a damn word you sayin. other than that it seems good.

and oh yeah i cant understand a damn word youre sayin.

edit: I have some alarming news. all of my sources tell me that this is sung in a different language. and the title is "tow Fart"
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Unread post by T1nM4n » Sun May 15, 2005 12:47 pm

aside from the fact i dont know whats being said, its good
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Unread post by borocks » Wed May 18, 2005 10:34 am

thanks, hehe

after all it's music in the first place
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