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Take a listen to this..

Unread post by 4monthguitarplayer » Fri Aug 15, 2003 3:56 am

Hey all. this is my first time to ever post any of my stuff on the INT. ive been playing for 8 months now.

http://www.angelfire.com/music5/chrishoch/ - its entitled my song

Here are the songs on the file..

#40 intro---> OSW intro--->Warehouse Stop-time intro--->Minarets verse--->So Damn Lucky Verse and Chorus---> Fire and Rain verse--->Dust in the wind (OLD SCHOOL THE MOVIE STYLE- friends request)--->Tripping billies intro


ITS PRETTY CRAZY

I sing, well kinda, on the So damn Lucky chorus and the whole thing of Dust in the wind. I', just 15 years old so be nice :D

any feedback would be grrreat

please take a listen
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Unread post by everydayDMBfan_18 » Fri Aug 15, 2003 4:09 am

I'll listen to it later today....hmmm....4 month guitar player...thats played for 8 months... :-p
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Unread post by Ando » Fri Aug 15, 2003 4:28 pm

Like ittttttttttt
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Unread post by NoNotThat » Fri Aug 15, 2003 4:32 pm

everydayDMBfan_18 wrote:I'll listen to it later today....hmmm....4 month guitar player...thats played for 8 months... :-p
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Unread post by isaac » Fri Aug 15, 2003 5:48 pm

to be honest, it's kind of messy. #40 sounded clunky to start out with...but it was a nice transition into One Sweet World. but the rest of the songs just seem sort of thrown in there for the sake of throwing them in there...if it was a smoother transition between each i think it'd be a lot better. your voice sort of gets drowned out, too. keep working, mate...just gotta fine tune it a bit more. :)
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Unread post by 4monthguitarplayer » Fri Aug 15, 2003 5:52 pm

thanks for listening, yea it was just some crazy idea my brother wanted me to do late last night. it started off with about 2 songs then ended up the way it is but oh well, haha yea i need to work on some of them just keep practicing
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Unread post by isaac » Fri Aug 15, 2003 5:53 pm

yep. lol. ;) try not to get TOO many in there, next time.
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Sun Aug 17, 2003 3:48 pm

Sounds good 4monthguitarplayer, #40 did sound choppy though. Don't worry about being 15 and singing, cause i'm 15 and sing, yet never am satisfied with my recordings enough to post em. :)
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Unread post by geekmug » Sun Aug 17, 2003 9:27 pm

Well, you are new at guitar.. but learn to tune your guitar is my first request before you post more stuff. As for your playing, sounds like you are chugging along learning.. but I couldn't listen to the whole thing, the tuning was messing with my head.

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Unread post by mbgreen » Mon Aug 18, 2003 1:18 am

I really coundnt concentrate on anything because the guitar was pretty far out of tune. Tune up and post like one full song instead of a segue of different verses.
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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Mon Aug 18, 2003 3:09 am

man, how could you hear yourself playing that and not know its out of tune? especially on #40...

like mike said, tune up, and do another one...

but....that is pretty good for not playing that long, I didnt even touch warehouse until 2 years of playing.

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