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Lover Lay Down Cover...

Unread post by 4monthguitarplayer » Sat Aug 16, 2003 4:19 am

Hey all, i recorded a cover of Lover Lay Down please take a listen...

http://www.angelfire.com/music5/chrishoch/LOVERLAY.mp3



I know this singing just sucks to sum it all up but i thought the guitar was good. any feeback would be great :lol:
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Unread post by isaac » Sat Aug 16, 2003 11:32 am

the chorus was a little sloppy...otherwise, the guitar part was pretty good. here's a quick recording to help you smooth it out a little more...it's not perfect by any means, but hopefully it'll help ya out. ;)

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Unread post by 4monthguitarplayer » Sat Aug 16, 2003 3:56 pm

thanks for the clip isaac. i learned the chorus about 30 minutes before i recorded it so i guess it showed haha. thanks
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Unread post by Ando » Sat Aug 16, 2003 4:01 pm

Isaac just about said it. Just need to clean it up a bit more.
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Unread post by Nicholas D. Wolfwood » Sat Aug 16, 2003 9:48 pm

As Isaac said the guitar parts are good. But the singing isn't bad. Could be worked on though :-p

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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Sun Aug 17, 2003 3:46 pm

No offence, but maybe you could put some enthusiasm into the singing.. sounds like your just kinda sittin there bored and singing.. but other then that decent :)
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Unread post by 4monthguitarplayer » Sun Aug 17, 2003 4:04 pm

No offence, but maybe you could put some enthusiasm into the singing.. sounds like your just kinda sittin there bored and singing.. but other then that decent

thanks for the response, yea it was about 2 or 3 am i was getting kind of tired. i cant really sing anyway but oh well
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