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Unread post by GreyBlueAnt » Tue May 10, 2005 10:12 pm

This is a snippet from my computer challenged friend. He's still working out the lyrics, so i'll post again when he finishes it. He's playing both guitar parts and violin in this.

http://danelmhorst.cumulativemind.com/mp3s/snippet.mp3



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Unread post by Dan5290 » Tue May 10, 2005 10:25 pm

WOW. That is awesome. At first the guitar seemed really basic and kinda boring, but when the second guitar and the violin came in, I loved it.
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Unread post by GreyBlueAnt » Wed May 11, 2005 12:42 am

yeah, the kids good.
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Unread post by DRMusic » Wed May 11, 2005 1:09 am

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Unread post by DRMusic » Wed May 11, 2005 1:18 am

GreyBlueAnt wrote:This is a snippet from my computer challenged friend. He's still working out the lyrics, so i'll post again when he finishes it. He's playing both guitar parts and violin in this.

http://danelmhorst.cumulativemind.com/mp3s/snippet.mp3
are you sure about this? he has his own website...
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Unread post by GreyBlueAnt » Wed May 11, 2005 1:35 am

DRMusic wrote:
GreyBlueAnt wrote:This is a snippet from my computer challenged friend. He's still working out the lyrics, so i'll post again when he finishes it. He's playing both guitar parts and violin in this.

http://danelmhorst.cumulativemind.com/mp3s/snippet.mp3
are you sure about this? he has his own website...
Yeah, i made it- I run it, he just pays for it.
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Unread post by DRMusic » Wed May 11, 2005 11:47 am

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Unread post by mangold » Wed May 11, 2005 2:13 pm

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Unread post by GreyBlueAnt » Thu May 12, 2005 2:20 am

118 views and 5 messages. let me know what you think, even if it's bad... i can take it. =)
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Unread post by guitardmb » Thu May 12, 2005 7:23 am

I really like it. Not liking the beginning much. I would say just fewer of the scales at the beginning, or find a better lick to play at the beginning but once the other guitar and violin come in it is awesome!

What did he use to record this?
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Unread post by GreyBlueAnt » Thu May 12, 2005 10:35 am

guitardmb wrote:I really like it. Not liking the beginning much. I would say just fewer of the scales at the beginning, or find a better lick to play at the beginning but once the other guitar and violin come in it is awesome!

What did he use to record this?
M-Audio Firewire Solo
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Unread post by blitz » Thu May 12, 2005 12:46 pm

very good... the beginning works imo.
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Unread post by juineaux » Thu May 12, 2005 1:05 pm

I like it, but I agree the scale like intro can get a little repetitive. The violin sounds like an electric, or was it just recorded differently? I went to his website and checked out a few tunes, he has a nice voice.
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Unread post by GreyBlueAnt » Thu May 12, 2005 2:46 pm

He's got a custom made acoutic/electric violin. It's awesome. I agree though. I think the scale should be a little shorter, we were just trying to get the idea recorded.
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Unread post by guitardmb » Thu May 12, 2005 3:05 pm

GreyBlueAnt wrote:
guitardmb wrote:I really like it. Not liking the beginning much. I would say just fewer of the scales at the beginning, or find a better lick to play at the beginning but once the other guitar and violin come in it is awesome!

What did he use to record this?
M-Audio Firewire Solo
What software I mean?
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