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Rowlf
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and now for something completely different (own recording)

Unread post by Rowlf » Sun May 08, 2005 3:20 am

hullow!

I'm kind of brandspankingnew here and it seems like you guys are a fun lot to hang out with ... online that is :)

and is there any better way to introduce yourself than posting an mp3 of your own work ?
Here's a link to it :

http://users.pandora.be/Luyckx/Tricks%2 ... 0Sleep.mp3

It's called Watching You Sleep, and was written and recorded last november.

I'd love to hear your comments!

TIA and take care

Rowlf
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Unread post by Swede » Sun May 08, 2005 7:46 am

first= dmbtabs.com welcome to it and enjoy

I like the song, you have a good voice and i like the lyrics.

the first time i listen to it i didn´t like when the drums came in at 2:43, the second time it sounded better, dont know why... but i think you should play this acoustic. ohh and i like the ending alot

great work
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Unread post by mangold » Sun May 08, 2005 12:45 pm

Swede wrote: dmbtabs.com welcome to it
this is really good work. good lyrics (a little freaky though) and vocals. i agree it should be acoustic. the piano is a nice touch... you'll fit in nicely here.

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Unread post by DRMusic » Sun May 08, 2005 10:00 pm

pretty badass. i'm not a fan of the drums for some reason, but i'm diggin it overall
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Unread post by Kahn » Mon May 09, 2005 9:25 am

Creepy song. Are you going for that techno beat Eurythmics sound? Cause if you are you acheive it well.

edit: I like the piano
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Unread post by jellyfish » Mon May 09, 2005 9:29 am

Where the hell is Belgica? :)
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Unread post by Rowlf » Mon May 09, 2005 10:11 am

hello all, thanks for the comments

I've had numerous comments on the drums, so I'm planning on replacing them with acoustic drums ... we'll see where that takes the song ... I kind of like the creepy atmosphere they create right now ...

thanks for listening, you all, and I'll try to post some more stuff soon!

ps : Belgica is actually Belgium ... and don't ask me why I chose to change it :)
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Unread post by Rowlf » Tue May 10, 2005 3:36 pm

anyone willing to comment some more ? I would really appreciate the feedback.

TIA!
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