Short little song..............is finished

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Unread post by T1nM4n » Mon May 09, 2005 8:57 pm

freaking awsome soong, love what youve done with the two guitar parts and the panning, really great song
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Unread post by mangold » Mon May 09, 2005 9:21 pm

much better this time around. it actually sounds like a guitar..... vocals are still good. This is a very good song and i like the lyrics even more now. The mixing is especially godd too. Nice work kahn....
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Unread post by Rowlf » Tue May 10, 2005 3:36 am

yeah, it sounds much nicer now! ... but I would adjust the balance in the chorus ... because now you've put the leadvocals way in the back (and to the right) and the backings in the left front ... it should be the other way around, in my opinion ... or at least at the same level.

But this is still a great song! As the others said, the guitarparts blend in nicely with eachother.

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Unread post by Kahn » Tue May 10, 2005 5:52 am

Thanks guys
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