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GreyBlueAnt · Unread post by **GreyBlueAnt** » Wed May 04, 2005 2:45 am

Well, i've been working on this song for a little while and i'm totally undecided if i should keep going with it, or trash it. Take a listen let me know what you think.

*As of right now there are lyrics at the beginning and at the end only (after the key change).

http://www.cumulativemind.com/mp3s/Home.wma

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Wed May 04, 2005 12:22 pm

eh... your voice is great as always. the guitar is average... keep workin on it

GreyBlueAnt · Unread post by **GreyBlueAnt** » Wed May 04, 2005 8:23 pm

anyone else?

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Wed May 04, 2005 8:26 pm

heh heh (i dont matter)

GreyBlueAnt · Unread post by **GreyBlueAnt** » Wed May 04, 2005 9:34 pm

you do. I was just hoping for a couple opinions.

juineaux · Unread post by **juineaux** » Wed May 04, 2005 9:57 pm

I like it, your voice is great, but sometimes it gets a little too bassy/low.The guitar part is good(but needs some tightening), and the writing seems pretty good, but a big chorus/hook dosn't really jump out at me. Not every song needs a hook, most of mine don't, but alot of people will judge you on that alone. I would certainly keep it, just edit it down about a minute, and add some more lyrics-

GreyBlueAnt · Unread post by **GreyBlueAnt** » Wed May 04, 2005 10:10 pm

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