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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Tue Aug 12, 2003 6:58 pm

I've been working with this one lately... here's a brief sample, just the 2nd verse.

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Unread post by Coldchillin » Tue Aug 12, 2003 7:00 pm

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Unread post by Coldchillin » Tue Aug 12, 2003 7:08 pm

It sounds really good. It's not the exact same way I do it, but no two are alike. Props man! Do you tune your guitar up or capo the 7th?
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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Tue Aug 12, 2003 7:10 pm

Thanks... I just stick a capo on 7, feel kinda cheap doing it but I get all sweaty and nervous when I'm doing any alternate tuning other than drop-D. Where can I hear you?

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Unread post by Coldchillin » Tue Aug 12, 2003 7:11 pm

Umm
I use Angelfire...So I only know how to do one song at a time,. let me see what I can cook up real fast...No singing though
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Unread post by Coldchillin » Tue Aug 12, 2003 7:18 pm

Here it is...
http://www.angelfire.com/music5/coldchi ... introo.mp3
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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Tue Aug 12, 2003 7:22 pm

Good job, man... especially for 8 months... for 8 months that is remarkable. You definitely play it faster than I do, which is probably closer to the actual tempo, but I love playing that song slow for some reason. Anyway, nice to meet you man, thanks for the response.

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Unread post by Coldchillin » Tue Aug 12, 2003 7:26 pm

No, you're probably right. I rush a lot of things...Damn bad habits...lol. It was nice to share something with you though...Thank you for that. I'm sure I'll see you around.
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Unread post by isaac » Tue Aug 12, 2003 7:31 pm

it's actually a lot slower. i had a problem with it too. i think you might be hitting the chords a little too hard on the chorus, and that throws off the rhythm a little bit, but other than that, it sounds great. :)
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Unread post by Coldchillin » Tue Aug 12, 2003 7:37 pm

Thank you. Sorry, I am new at this (insert blush face here, lol)
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Unread post by heathcliff » Wed Aug 13, 2003 2:51 pm

thanks for posting these, I think you both did a great job. I am having a hard time singing along to the verse. Did you guys write this out or did it come naturally?

thanks

if you wrote it out can I get a copy?

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Unread post by Coldchillin » Wed Aug 13, 2003 3:35 pm

If you're talking about tabs...they are on the main site...under, umm, b-sides I think
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Unread post by heathcliff » Wed Aug 13, 2003 3:44 pm

Coldchillin23222 wrote:If you're talking about tabs...they are on the main site...under, umm, b-sides I think
I guess it's kind of pathetic, I can play the song but I can't match the words up with the chords.

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Unread post by Coldchillin » Wed Aug 13, 2003 3:53 pm

Oh, well, the best thing I can tell you is to listen, learn the words, sing along, and then sing along air guitaring. Eventually you will put it together...
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