new original-look into the setting sun

[acusticdude]

This is a song I just finished the other day. Like the waste cover I posted, the vocals are doubled. I have gotten feedback to drop the 2nd vocal, I just need to get off my lazy ass and do it. Let me know what you think of the song itself. I want to play it at open mic on monday and I don't want to clear the house. I usually just play covers with a random original dropped in there and I have not gotten a very good response to my songs. Anyway, any feedback would be greatly appreicated.

http://s47.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2LFD ... ZFR3IAKYQE

[GreyBlueAnt]

music isn't bad, not a huge fan of the lyrics or melody though. sounds too.... bubble gum.

[mangold]

eh, guitarsnt bad, but the lyrics are annoying with the doubling. the distortion makes it very unclean when listening to it... not bad overall, keep on workin

[You_Enjoy_Myself]

Nice use of "the dave chords", at least I think that's what I'm hearing. I agree with praise, the doubled vocals are kinda annoying on this one, but I still think you should do this one at the open mic.