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by Appfro » Tue Apr 05, 2005 11:33 am
i liked it. your english was fine. i love this song and you did a pretty good job on the cover. your vocals were too low but i'm pretty sure you record guitar and vocal at the same time so you can't do much about that.
Where are the falsettos???

those are my favorite part.
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by Swede » Tue Apr 05, 2005 11:38 am
Appfro wrote:i liked it. your english was fine. i love this song and you did a pretty good job on the cover. your vocals were too low but i'm pretty sure you record guitar and vocal at the same time so you can't do much about that.
Where are the falsettos???

those are my favorite part.
haha thanks apps. yeah,, i recorded the vocals and guitar at the same time,, i dont have a strong voice so i couldn´t do the chorus!
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by fatjack » Tue Apr 05, 2005 5:19 pm
i hate this song, but you did well
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by myxomatosis » Tue Apr 05, 2005 9:26 pm
nice job again

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by mlb1399 » Tue Apr 05, 2005 10:10 pm
English was fine. I thought you did a good job!
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by Swede » Wed Apr 06, 2005 2:49 pm
fatjack wrote:i hate this song, but you did well
thank you Josh
and i´m glad you all liked it
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by c_tietze » Sun Apr 10, 2005 2:14 am
Timing is off, but not too shabby.
I don't know if Coldpay is like "your band" but you sound a lot like Chris. Good stuff
Work on your timing and lose the verbage on the vocals.
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by MOE.PHISH » Sun Apr 10, 2005 10:21 am
i dont listen to coldplay so this is the first time ive ever heard it, i dug it, i dont think your vocals were too low for the song, english was fine, your accent adds to it, all in all def nicely done 8)
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by borocks » Sun Apr 10, 2005 1:10 pm
I liked although I missed the falsettos as Mitch said. your voice sounds nice somehow, make something out if it!
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by Swede » Wed May 11, 2005 5:04 pm
TOP!
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