#41 cover

[Miller1221]

Only my second cover ever haha please critique...
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3SGD ... L6J0M992LX

[AdamCU81]

Your voice is deep. The octave you're singing in may be too low for you. If you can't sing a whole octave higher, maybe try getting a capo and putting it in different places until you find a more suitable key for your voice. The guitar sounded fine to me. There was a bit of noise right before the solo guitar came in at the end that you might want to fix. The timing on the very end ditty sound truncated, but it may have been on purpose.

[borocks]

The guitar sounds good man. I liked it overall. The lead stuff that you played in the end seemed nice, I like these L@LC fills...
As for the voice, I totally agree with Adam. You shoud try to sing it an octave higher. you almost lost the pitch on certain parts, it was that low. additionally I'd make it sound much more powerful if you sing higher. Keep working on your voice and you'll be fine.

[deceptivehero]

Yeah definately just sing higher and you'll be just fine. Good guitar work, I thought the solo at the end was nicely done.

[dmbsaxboyz]

awesome guitar work

I found it it interesting how you sang it all soo low, except the falsetto was in the right octave

but yah, i think if you sing the rest an octave higher it will be just fine. that song has an insane range, insane because we have balls and we're physically not able to do what mariah carey can do ;D but sometimes if i feel not warmed up, or just out of my ellement ill sing some of the higher stuff in falsetto as well, or ill change the melody slightly and harmonize with lower pitches, kinda like what dave does in the L@LC version for the first 'high' note.

[TaylorGuy110]

keep up the good work