Some lyrics for ya'll

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Some lyrics for ya'll

Unread post by Teego Time » Sun Mar 13, 2005 1:48 am

Yeah I've had kind of a shitty weekend, so I wrote this to reflect part of it. See if you can guess what it's about. The theme is rather simple.

Verse 1
I feel you talking to someone else
I feel you walking and stumbling down
You’re seeing two of everything now
You can’t think straight with your face on the ground

A kaleidoscope of the world takes over now
As you wonder, just how you’ll get out
But why would you want to?
Because you’re so numb now

Chorus
Oh, but you’ve seen the stars
And they were spinning around
And you made your way
Then you knelt down
To pray and pray
Nothing will help you now

Verse 2
It’s funny how time slips away
When it’s so slowed down
Skewed perceptions distorted through it all
And you wonder how you’re still alive
Face up on the floor
Tilt your head to the side

Chorus
Oh, but you’ve seen the stars
And they were spinning around
And you made your way
Then you knelt down
To pray and pray
Nothing will help you now

Verse 3
It’s all the same to you, at this point now
You’ll go further and further each time
Till you end up, cold and shut down
In a moment of clarity you acknowledge your fall
Only to forget it once and for all

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Unread post by guitardmb » Sun Mar 13, 2005 11:32 am

nice i like it....record it with music and vocals and post it.

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Re: Some lyrics for ya'll

Unread post by Kahn » Sun Mar 13, 2005 12:27 pm

Teego Time wrote:Yeah I've had kind of a shitty weekend, so I wrote this to reflect part of it. See if you can guess what it's about. The theme is rather simple.

Verse 1
I feel you talking to someone else
I feel you walking and stumbling down
You’re seeing two of everything now
You can’t think straight with your face on the ground

A kaleidoscope of the world takes over now
As you wonder, just how you’ll get out
But why would you want to?
Because you’re so numb now

Chorus
Oh, but you’ve seen the stars
And they were spinning around
And you made your way
Then you knelt down
To pray and pray
Nothing will help you now

Verse 2
It’s funny how time slips away
When it’s so slowed down
Skewed perceptions distorted through it all
And you wonder how you’re still alive
Face up on the floor
Tilt your head to the side

Chorus
Oh, but you’ve seen the stars
And they were spinning around
And you made your way
Then you knelt down
To pray and pray
Nothing will help you now

Verse 3
It’s all the same to you, at this point now
You’ll go further and further each time
Till you end up, cold and shut down
In a moment of clarity you acknowledge your fall
Only to forget it once and for all
i dont know if that will go over well with Willie

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Re: Some lyrics for ya'll

Unread post by Teego Time » Sun Mar 13, 2005 1:15 pm

KahnTheRevelator wrote:
Teego Time wrote:Yeah I've had kind of a shitty weekend, so I wrote this to reflect part of it. See if you can guess what it's about. The theme is rather simple.

Verse 1
I feel you talking to someone else
I feel you walking and stumbling down
You’re seeing two of everything now
You can’t think straight with your face on the ground

A kaleidoscope of the world takes over now
As you wonder, just how you’ll get out
But why would you want to?
Because you’re so numb now

Chorus
Oh, but you’ve seen the stars
And they were spinning around
And you made your way
Then you knelt down
To pray and pray
Nothing will help you now

Verse 2
It’s funny how time slips away
When it’s so slowed down
Skewed perceptions distorted through it all
And you wonder how you’re still alive
Face up on the floor
Tilt your head to the side

Chorus
Oh, but you’ve seen the stars
And they were spinning around
And you made your way
Then you knelt down
To pray and pray
Nothing will help you now

Verse 3
It’s all the same to you, at this point now
You’ll go further and further each time
Till you end up, cold and shut down
In a moment of clarity you acknowledge your fall
Only to forget it once and for all
i dont know if that will go over well with Willie

Haha, ya know I didn't even think about that till after you mentioned it. Eh whatever.

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