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2 new songs

Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Mon Mar 07, 2005 11:32 pm

ones called today, and the other is called you hang heavy. they can be heard at http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/thekilosmusic.htm Today is about meeting a girl for the first time, and You hang heavy is about breaking apart.


tell me waht you guys think
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see

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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Tue Mar 08, 2005 3:01 pm

anyone?
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Tue Mar 08, 2005 3:08 pm

this is pretty good man. I like the bass at lot. really nice and calm. Your vocal is pretty good. I do think tho, that you could have made a better recording with better quality. Overall. this is pretty good. I enjoy it well.

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Unread post by Kahn » Tue Mar 08, 2005 4:10 pm

i like your sound. the quality of the recording takes away from it but overall youre singing is good, youre lyrics are good, and the guitar sounds solid. keep it up man.

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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Tue Mar 08, 2005 4:39 pm

which songs are you guys talking abuot when u post? can u be a little more specific
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Tue Mar 08, 2005 5:47 pm

i am talking about you hang heavy.
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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Tue Mar 08, 2005 6:22 pm

thank you very much. did u like any others
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see

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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Sat Mar 12, 2005 2:01 am

Can anyone help me
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see

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Unread post by dmbsaxboyz » Sat Mar 12, 2005 2:20 am

hey man. good stuff! i think the main problem with your recording, (im listening to Today right now), is u need a LOT of compression. what are you using to record and/or mix?

also, the songs have a really good 'structure' im deff a sucker for happy sounds ;) I think the melody can use a bit more color tho. the harmony is soo bright and happy, but the melody stays pretty calm and subdued imo. imma have a listen to some of the other stuff u have up there now. :)
-Cory

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