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tell what you think

Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Wed Mar 02, 2005 5:15 pm

of our band website



http://thekilos.cjb.net/


if you want a demo, aim me
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see

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Unread post by mangold » Wed Mar 02, 2005 5:21 pm

seanbryantkbq wrote:of our band website



http://thekilos.cjb.net/


if you want a demo, aim me
its average...

i like the

feb 27: site started
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Unread post by borocks » Wed Mar 02, 2005 5:22 pm

what are we supposed to tell you?
I didn't find any songs to listen to
<a href=http://www.bosmusikwelt.ch.vu>my music</a>
<a href=http://www.bosfotowelt.ch.vu>my photo album</a>

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Unread post by mangold » Wed Mar 02, 2005 5:23 pm

borocks wrote:what are we supposed to tell you?
I didn't find any songs to listen to
he wants crit on the site itself
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Unread post by borocks » Wed Mar 02, 2005 5:36 pm

praisedave wrote:
borocks wrote:what are we supposed to tell you?
I didn't find any songs to listen to
he wants crit on the site itself
well I ain't a whizz kid either in web designing, but it leaves a bit to be desired...
I doubt this is the right forum for that
<a href=http://www.bosmusikwelt.ch.vu>my music</a>
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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Wed Mar 02, 2005 5:40 pm

well i didnt want to get bitched at for posting in nDMB
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see

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Unread post by borocks » Wed Mar 02, 2005 5:56 pm

seanbryantkbq wrote:well i didnt want to get bitched at for posting in nDMB
I figure ;)

I just meant that you probably won't get any help for improving.
<a href=http://www.bosmusikwelt.ch.vu>my music</a>
<a href=http://www.bosfotowelt.ch.vu>my photo album</a>

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Unread post by Kahn » Wed Mar 02, 2005 6:48 pm

heres some constructive criticism. try changing the color scheme from black and neon green to something more profesional and orthodox. people will take youre band more seriously that way. no offense, but the site looks like it was made in a 9th grade web design class.

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Unread post by Beauford33 » Wed Mar 02, 2005 6:54 pm

take away the three wierd looking kids in the first pictures and people might enter.
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Wed Mar 02, 2005 6:56 pm

KahnTheRevelator wrote:heres some constructive criticism. try changing the color scheme from black and neon green to something more profesional and orthodox. people will take youre band more seriously that way. no offense, but the site looks like it was made in a 9th grade web design class.
i agree. there is no professionalism in it. If you're not good at web site designing, you're better off with liek a website design program.

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1. change the font
2. change the color
3. arrange it neatly
4. copy ideas from other good sites.
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Unread post by Swede » Wed Mar 02, 2005 7:19 pm

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WHAT THE FUCK!!

i´s that dog shit on his shoe?
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Unread post by fatjack » Wed Mar 02, 2005 7:27 pm

i like how the "photo shoot" is in the living room

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Unread post by myxomatosis » Wed Mar 02, 2005 8:00 pm

it's blank when I click on it :( :( :(
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Unread post by Swede » Wed Mar 02, 2005 8:11 pm

go to the home page and klick on pic´s.. in the last pic there is a guy with dog shit on his shoes.
Gravel in your shoes may be diamonds, but it hurts anyway..

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Unread post by You_Enjoy_Myself » Wed Mar 02, 2005 8:37 pm

thepackage0 wrote:it's blank when I click on it
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