Recorded the storytelling song

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Recorded the storytelling song

Unread post by borocks » Tue Mar 01, 2005 8:27 am

I posted the lyrics to an original song the other day and finally managed to record the song today. The lyrics have changed a bit and I hope for the better. I know the fills kinda suck, they were improvised and contain lots of slips.

Please have a listen:
Bo - Song #5

thanks in advance
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Unread post by You_Enjoy_Myself » Tue Mar 01, 2005 12:44 pm

Nice work Bo. I like your voice and your lyrics, they both reminded me of OAR, which is good. The fills were decent and the rhythm guitar was steady. Nothing too outstanding here, but a job well done.
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Unread post by mangold » Tue Mar 01, 2005 12:52 pm

i like it, i think the rhythm guitar would benefit from some reverb.

you have an interesting singing voice, buti like it. the lyrics are good.

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Unread post by borocks » Tue Mar 01, 2005 5:39 pm

You_Enjoy_Myself wrote:Nice work Bo. I like your voice and your lyrics, they both reminded me of OAR, which is good. The fills were decent and the rhythm guitar was steady. Nothing too outstanding here, but a job well done.
I disagree with the fills :wink:

but thanks though
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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Thu Mar 03, 2005 2:59 am

i dig your voice, i can hear the oar vibe, YEM mentioned. The lead fits really well. I like the structure and everything. It sounds really good overall. Nice work

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