Late Spirit. An Original

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Late Spirit. An Original

Unread post by Tranman66 » Wed Feb 23, 2005 5:59 pm

This is a short jam. I wrote out the progression but the lead is freestyle, improvising, or whatever you call it lol. Well tell me what you think.

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Wed Feb 23, 2005 10:01 pm

come on... no one?
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Unread post by eliot1171 » Wed Feb 23, 2005 10:28 pm

Its got a latin sound which I like, I like the trasnfer at 1:30. I just think your bending too much at the begining on the lead. It makes it sound out of tune. over all good.
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Unread post by borocks » Thu Feb 24, 2005 8:04 am

the melody sounds kind of odd, but that doesn't mean it's bad though. I just think it could be a bit difficult to sing along with it.
did you come up with some lyrics? I wonder how this would sound.
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