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Unread post by JazzBassist114 » Tue Feb 22, 2005 10:13 pm

Yeah, its been done

oh well, deal with it. This isn't fantastic, but my voice sounds okay, anyway.

feel free to crit

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Unread post by joyrider36 » Tue Feb 22, 2005 11:35 pm

i like the guitar in that, i tried to learn that song a few weeks back, still learning....haha. I like your sublime one even better, are you on both guitars?

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Unread post by borocks » Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:41 am

the guitar was awesome man, what kind of guitar is it?
as for the voice, I think the vocals should be a bit more discernable and louder. besides that I liked it. good job
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Unread post by JazzBassist114 » Wed Feb 23, 2005 3:12 pm

umm...i used the same one as my what i got cover... its an applause AA-10, i think? and its got coated d'adderios.
yeah, its me on both guitars.
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Unread post by mangold » Wed Feb 23, 2005 3:20 pm

i dont think the timing is right in the intro... atleast thats not how i play it.

plus the bridge should actually include the slide.

vocals arent bad. i like how you completely skip the notes you cant hit.

you miss some notes when you play the full chorus. (vocally)

my response is mmnehh

(im only being critical because we were playig this at mah howse and we sounded alot better together)
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Unread post by mangold » Wed Feb 23, 2005 3:22 pm

BRAKES!!!

it got to the end as i was posting in a diff thread... im surprised you included that in the version that you posted. oyu should play it for her in person you douche...
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Unread post by jellyfish » Wed Feb 23, 2005 4:38 pm

The timing was off in the intro as praisedave said. To me that is extremely important when doing a song like this.

Again, you need to bring the vocals up. Is there somebody else in the house that you are afraid of waking up? :)

Take a drive and sing your heart out. Then bring that same enthusiasm back to the mic.

Otherwise, it was good.

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Unread post by jellyfish » Wed Feb 23, 2005 4:39 pm

Did she say yes?

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Unread post by JazzBassist114 » Wed Feb 23, 2005 5:33 pm

fuck...i completely forgot that was on there....

AAAHHH

oh well. I gotta call her and find out. damn HS girls take so freaking long to decide....

PS thanx for the crit, and yeah, everyone was sleeping when i recorded this.
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Unread post by mangold » Wed Feb 23, 2005 5:49 pm

you already sent it? hope shes not freaked out by the whole... DO YOU WANNA GET MARRIED?
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Unread post by JazzBassist114 » Wed Feb 23, 2005 7:38 pm

hahahahahaha...shaddup
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Unread post by Brock » Wed Feb 23, 2005 7:40 pm

praisedave wrote:you already sent it? hope shes not freaked out by the whole... DO YOU WANNA GET MARRIED?
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Unread post by JazzBassist114 » Wed Feb 23, 2005 7:42 pm

its lyrics to a song, we're inn 10th grade, and i'm not really worried about it.
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Unread post by JazzBassist114 » Sat Feb 26, 2005 12:45 pm

probably a little late, but for anyone who cares/asked...
she said yes
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Unread post by mangold » Sat Feb 26, 2005 2:56 pm

no one cares
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