New Original: Solitude

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New Original: Solitude

Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Feb 20, 2005 12:34 am

Alright, here it is. Straight up, yo.

http://www.patmcinnis.com/solitude.mp3
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Sun Feb 20, 2005 12:37 am

wow, 9/10. this is very good. amazing piece of work. nice progression. i am again impressed. nice job man. Very solid.
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sun Feb 20, 2005 12:41 am

pat. your effing awesome. this piece didnt need the extra extra reverb tho. anyway, definitley classical influence in this, kind of classical-timmy style and i like it ALOT. DAMN MAN.
Im listening to it now it keeps getting better and better. Good job with the tapping. This kind of music gets me inspired.
This piece is inspiring.
Im out, theres nothing i can say to critique, except the extra reverb makes the slap sound a little floopy.
I <3 it.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Feb 20, 2005 12:42 am

Ahh, I'll change that. I'm not to smart with audio stuff. I'll go in and reduce it a bit.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Feb 20, 2005 1:08 am

Shit, imma have to redo this one. The transition at 2:00 is terrible. I'll see if I can do it tomorrow.
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Unread post by eliot1171 » Sun Feb 20, 2005 1:36 am

Very good, i like the reverb. Also agree on the transition at 2 min. Make it a little smoother and ur golden
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Unread post by Istreet » Sun Feb 20, 2005 2:39 am

Very well played, remind me of Al DiMeola and Paco De Lucia playing Midnight Sonata quiet a bit. Enjoyed it alot, keep up the good work.

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Unread post by MWR » Sun Feb 20, 2005 3:22 am

I think the reverb is just right. Sounds like a tad too much when listening with headphones but on desktop speakers it's just right.

I'm freaking loving this Pat. I daresay it's your best work. There's a focus and thoughfulness to this that I haven't heard from you before. I can't wait till you get this fleshed out so I can put it on a CD.

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Unread post by trippin6strings » Sun Feb 20, 2005 4:58 am

wow, that is good music man, I feel like i can hear what your thinking and feeling throughout this piece, and that makes me realize how much of an art this is. those are the only thoughts i want you to take from me cuz you've got it man, you belong on a stage...
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Sun Feb 20, 2005 9:17 am

dont change the reverb, its perfect.
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sun Feb 20, 2005 10:35 am

beautiful, beautiful. did already comment on this?
DONT MATTER--COMMENTING AGAIN.
fix that transition and this is going on my next mix cd!
It sounds...like something a person without lessons couldnt ever create. But you did! And now you got em' (lessons), (so) your gonna take off pat.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Feb 20, 2005 10:54 am

Alrighty, I'm going to redo this soon.

Thanks for the comments everyone. I'm going to lower the reverb a tad.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Feb 20, 2005 12:22 pm

alright, i redid it. exporting now...
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sun Feb 20, 2005 12:45 pm

yes
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Unread post by borocks » Sun Feb 20, 2005 2:01 pm

This song is amazing Pat. It's very mellow to listen to which I love.
Great job, really all I can say!
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