yeah, the lyrics are pretty sappy again, but the actual melody is pretty unique

(and once again i'll reiterate that i'm so glad to actually hear someone sing on key!)
the chord progression was kinda common, but your guitar playing is pretty tight... i even liked the little solo you did there
overall, this is a pretty good song, its really not the style i like, but i'm sure your musical girlfriend will like it

overall, on a 10 point scale, i'll give it a 7 1/2