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Original: Turn Away

Unread post by brian_ok » Sun Feb 13, 2005 6:29 pm

My band, The Brians (remember us from Hear I am, Crying?) just recorded a new song called Turn Away.

Unlike our first song, this is more serious, and just a better song. It explores the issue of choice.

Give it a listen and tell us what you think, either on here, on DMusic, or both!

Thanks alot.

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Unread post by hmm69 » Sun Feb 13, 2005 6:40 pm

are u playing the solo or the rythem
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Unread post by brian_ok » Sun Feb 13, 2005 6:47 pm

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Unread post by i am sam2 » Sun Feb 13, 2005 6:49 pm

voice is too loud it overpowers everything, made it hard to listen to
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Unread post by hmm69 » Sun Feb 13, 2005 6:51 pm

i think its a really good song but it needs to be refined a little. It seems like the intro is a little rough but besides that i love the lyrics of the chorusand whoevers voice that is is sweet :D
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Unread post by brian_ok » Sun Feb 13, 2005 6:58 pm

thanks, i'll tell him you said that.
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Unread post by borocks » Mon Feb 14, 2005 5:30 am

dude I really like the song.

you got a great voice
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