"SAVE YOURSELF"

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"SAVE YOURSELF"

Unread post by eliot1171 » Tue Feb 01, 2005 3:15 pm

Please critique my new recording "Save Yourself". It is a cover but my version of it. Please no comments about my crappy recording equipment.
Oh, and Andy if you read this, sory but I can't get any lyrics to sound good on that song. I tried like 3 hours the other day off and on, and nothing came out like I wanted. I guess your guitaring is just too advanced for me. :lol:

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Unread post by mangold » Tue Feb 01, 2005 3:43 pm

dont worry about it eliot, ive given up on writin guitar parts first, i need to go lyrics > guitar. thanks for tryin

i know you said no comments on the recording equip... but it sounds muffled. other than that this is terrific. i like it alot and oyu have a great voice. keep up the good work
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Unread post by eliot1171 » Fri Feb 04, 2005 4:07 pm

whats the deal with no one critiquing me? Is it because I'm new? Oh well.
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Fri Feb 04, 2005 4:23 pm

this is good, and yes you need some recording equipment. You have a great voice man, i've said that before. Your music has always been enjoyable. Good job.

I think people on this board are bored. Not that because your new. You have a lot of talent. I think people are getting lazy, tired and bored. Probably why the board has been so slow. I am bored too.
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Fri Feb 04, 2005 5:23 pm

Tranman66 wrote:this is good, and yes you need some recording equipment. I have a great voice man, i've said that before. Your music has always been enjoyable. Good job.

I think people on this board are bored. Not that because your new. You have a lot of talent. I think people are getting lazy, tired and bored. Probably why the board has been so slow. I am bored too.
haha, ok then

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Fri Feb 04, 2005 7:12 pm

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
Tranman66 wrote:this is good, and yes you need some recording equipment. you have a great voice man, i've said that before. Your music has always been enjoyable. Good job.

I think people on this board are bored. Not that because your new. You have a lot of talent. I think people are getting lazy, tired and bored. Probably why the board has been so slow. I am bored too.
haha, ok then
oh omg my bad!!! you you you. not myself, i have a horrible voice. edit edit
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Fri Feb 04, 2005 7:13 pm

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Unread post by HCHaikuWarrior » Sat Feb 05, 2005 12:52 pm

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Unread post by MaveDatthews » Thu Feb 10, 2005 7:52 pm

good voice man, just tune your guitar.
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