#41 and Typical Situation

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#41 and Typical Situation

Unread post by Jophus » Mon Jan 24, 2005 6:21 pm

Once again the songs were recorded in my home studio, this time we did the songs studio live where the three piece acoustic band all played at once...we put our own touch to the songs (especially with the harmonies) PLEASE CRITIQUE!

http://www.vradio.com/mp3_upload/1349/3353/%2341.mp3

http://www.vradio.com/mp3_upload/1349/3 ... ck%201.mp3

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Mon Jan 24, 2005 6:31 pm

hey man, very well done. Your studio setup sounds really nice. You might wanna reEqualize the recordings, cuz some part, it gets so bright the guitars sound like metal strings hitting bells. Very well done again. I would get rid of the harmonic vocals in 41, it was distracting, or at least lower the volume.

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Unread post by jared » Tue Jan 25, 2005 1:38 am

i loved them man.. guitar strings kinda bottom out in the beginning maybe? but dude really good, excellent job

edit: i really like the part at 3:50 "let all the tears splash all over you"

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Unread post by SpoonInSpoon » Sun Jan 30, 2005 9:07 pm

i liked typical situation better

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Unread post by JamesMatthews » Sun Jan 30, 2005 10:43 pm

I love the way you sing.
You're very good man.
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Unread post by deceptivehero » Mon Jan 31, 2005 11:04 pm

This was actually really good where do you guys play? I wouldn't mind checking you out live if you're anywhere near me.
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Unread post by borocks » Tue Feb 01, 2005 1:25 pm

I just listened to number41.

Great cover overall, man.
Sometimes I didn't find the strumming suitable, but that's just for the reason that I personally do it differently here and there, personal preference I guess...

As for the voice, you sound very good. your voice is very distinct. But what I like the most is the fact that you sing in your own style. I for one have great difficulity in doing so.

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Unread post by hmm69 » Tue Feb 01, 2005 1:27 pm

awesome :D
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Unread post by jmasta » Tue Feb 01, 2005 9:13 pm

truly, I enjoyed both songs. I liked #41 more, but I just enjoy that song more than typical situation. awesome job, your voice is killer. I'd be interested in seeing you live as well if you are anywhere in the greater tampa bay area.
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Unread post by shess22 » Tue Feb 01, 2005 11:55 pm

I listened to #41 and enjoyed it a lot. Your voice reminded me of Jason Mraz a little bit towards the middle/end. I liked the "Everyday" insert at the end i thought that was really cool

i thought it was kind of weird that you went back into the verse of 41 at the end, i think maybe it would be cool to go to the chorus instead of the verse, but it worked out and still sounded really good.

nice job :D

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