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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Jan 24, 2005 6:40 pm

i just wanted to see how this sounded to you guys. i've been trying to sing decently. i'm working on the entire song, with a second guitar and such.

its radiohead - high and dry

http://www.patmcinnis.com/sample.mp3
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Unread post by HCHaikuWarrior » Mon Jan 24, 2005 6:43 pm

getting better, i think radiohead style fits your voice the best...so far.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Jan 24, 2005 6:44 pm

my man thom has quite the voice...and range.
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Unread post by HCHaikuWarrior » Mon Jan 24, 2005 6:48 pm

yes, but from that sample it sounds like you fit it well.
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Unread post by MWR » Mon Jan 24, 2005 7:00 pm

You're a little flat at times but this is much better than the other vocals I've heard from you.
My advice is to relaaaaax. Don't force the notes out. Whatever you do don't strain to reach notes. That doesn't mean don't sing any high notes it means don't STRAIN for them. :) If you're doing it correctly than it shouldn't be uncomfortable.
Anyway, I could go on forever about things you should and shouldn't do but just use common sense, in other words if it hurts stop doing it.

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Mon Jan 24, 2005 7:11 pm

Yeah, a little flat at times but you'll fix that with practice. It was pretty minimal.
I'm impressed that for the most part you, hit the "high" notes. I agree with the comments about Thom but don't try to sound like him. Just sing comfortably and your own tone will start to develop.

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Jan 24, 2005 7:25 pm

thanks guys. the thing that bothers me is that i cant get the vibrato. will this come naturally?
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Mon Jan 24, 2005 7:29 pm

i think you have a pretty good voice, but its undeveloped. I've got good range in your vocal. You have a clear voice, its not bassy like some male singers. This has tons of potential.
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Unread post by MWR » Mon Jan 24, 2005 7:37 pm

Yes to an extent. It's a byproduct of good technique. It's hard to describe how to do it though.
When you have just the right amount of air going to the chords vibrato should be quite easy to do.

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Mon Jan 24, 2005 7:41 pm

MWR wrote:Yes to an extent. It's a byproduct of good technique. It's hard to describe how to do it though.
When you have just the right amount of air going to the chords vibrato should be quite easy to do.
Mike, when are you gonna record something with vocals on it? You know what you're talking about so imagine it would be decent.

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Unread post by MWR » Mon Jan 24, 2005 9:06 pm

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
MWR wrote:Yes to an extent. It's a byproduct of good technique. It's hard to describe how to do it though.
When you have just the right amount of air going to the chords vibrato should be quite easy to do.
Mike, when are you gonna record something with vocals on it? You know what you're talking about so imagine it would be decent.
I haven't been singing much lately, busy doing the instrumental crap. I've just started getting back into it and plan to have something soon.
I need to get consistant though. I'll sound good one moment and like a dying cat the next.

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Unread post by i-am-me » Mon Jan 24, 2005 9:48 pm

MWR wrote:
Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
MWR wrote:Yes to an extent. It's a byproduct of good technique. It's hard to describe how to do it though.
When you have just the right amount of air going to the chords vibrato should be quite easy to do.
Mike, when are you gonna record something with vocals on it? You know what you're talking about so imagine it would be decent.
I haven't been singing much lately, busy doing the instrumental crap. I've just started getting back into it and plan to have something soon.
I need to get consistant though. I'll sound good one moment and like a dying cat the next.
yea i've always wanted to hear something with vocals. everything you do is so incredible and i listen to your advice probably more than anyone elses on the boards...but i think its time you back it up. :wink:
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Unread post by MWR » Mon Jan 24, 2005 9:58 pm

i-am-me wrote:
MWR wrote:
Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
MWR wrote:Yes to an extent. It's a byproduct of good technique. It's hard to describe how to do it though.
When you have just the right amount of air going to the chords vibrato should be quite easy to do.
Mike, when are you gonna record something with vocals on it? You know what you're talking about so imagine it would be decent.
I haven't been singing much lately, busy doing the instrumental crap. I've just started getting back into it and plan to have something soon.
I need to get consistant though. I'll sound good one moment and like a dying cat the next.
yea i've always wanted to hear something with vocals. everything you do is so incredible and i listen to your advice probably more than anyone elses on the boards...but i think its time you back it up. :wink:
Image j/k

I have posted something with vocals, a long while ago. As a matter of fact Miguel was the first person to respond. :D
http://www.dmbtabs.com/boards/viewtopic ... ight=bleed -Link is broken so don't try.
It had all sorts of problems with it though and I wouldn't post something that rough now.

Sorry for hijacking Pat. :oops:

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Mon Jan 24, 2005 10:29 pm

repost it, i cnat get in, denied access
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Unread post by i-am-me » Tue Jan 25, 2005 9:08 pm

MWR wrote:
i-am-me wrote:
MWR wrote:
Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
MWR wrote:Yes to an extent. It's a byproduct of good technique. It's hard to describe how to do it though.
When you have just the right amount of air going to the chords vibrato should be quite easy to do.
Mike, when are you gonna record something with vocals on it? You know what you're talking about so imagine it would be decent.
I haven't been singing much lately, busy doing the instrumental crap. I've just started getting back into it and plan to have something soon.
I need to get consistant though. I'll sound good one moment and like a dying cat the next.
yea i've always wanted to hear something with vocals. everything you do is so incredible and i listen to your advice probably more than anyone elses on the boards...but i think its time you back it up. :wink:
Image j/k

I have posted something with vocals, a long while ago. As a matter of fact Miguel was the first person to respond. :D
http://www.dmbtabs.com/boards/viewtopic ... ight=bleed -Link is broken so don't try.
It had all sorts of problems with it though and I wouldn't post something that rough now.

Sorry for hijacking Pat. :oops:
ANYWAY!

PAT, sounds pretty damn good man. like miguel said, i was surprised you got to those high notes. i'm not a big vocal guy, so i can't critique so much, but it sounded good. maybe not as confident as it could be, but other than that, nicely done.
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