First Original: "Play"

eliot1171 · Unread post by **eliot1171** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 2:18 pm

Thanks for listening to my first recorded original. I did it in one take so hopefully you still enjoy it. Please give me some feed back on what you liked what you didn't like and what you would like to have heard differently.

The song is "Play"

http://www.purevolume.com/eliotmays

Tranman66 · Unread post by **Tranman66** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 3:09 pm

i thought it was good. The voice wasnt clear, and it's hard to hear the true projection of your voice. I know you're recording iwth a pc mic... you have a good voice. Guitar was not bad.

a1075dd63aa12 · Unread post by **a1075dd63aa12** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 3:14 pm

yea it sounded good overall, the recording quality was lacking because of the mic, you should really think about maybe getting the garageband cable or something running in to your computer if you have an acoustic electric, and as a mic, well i dont have a good mic so i dont i cant help you there, thats why there are no vocals on my stuff right now.

but overall i like the song it has a nice sound to it, i just couldnt hear the lyrics hardly at all

jmasta · Unread post by **jmasta** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 11:42 am

I enjoyed the song overall, it was a mellow riff, kind of catchy. over all good job

gumbomadness · Unread post by **gumbomadness** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 4:43 pm

jmasta wrote:I enjoyed the song overall, it was a mellow riff, kind of catchy. over all good job

leerob · Unread post by **leerob** » Tue Jan 18, 2005 12:30 am

awesome. serious talent bro.

Swe dmbfan · Unread post by **Swe dmbfan** » Tue Jan 18, 2005 12:31 am

not bad for a half swedish guy... :wink:

jesus_reynolds · Unread post by **jesus_reynolds** » Fri Jan 21, 2005 10:05 pm

is that your school picture?

eliot1171 · Unread post by **eliot1171** » Sat Jan 22, 2005 1:10 am

My avatar?

Yea kinda

tbillies86 · Unread post by **tbillies86** » Sat Jan 22, 2005 6:51 pm

Yo man, how did u get purevolume to work? I registered for the free membership and im trying to get it working, but when i search for myself it doesnt find me, its weird....think u can help?

eliot1171 · Unread post by **eliot1171** » Sat Jan 22, 2005 7:17 pm

maybe, but I need a little more info on the problem. Did you complete registration? What is you username? Did you check your email to activate it? Can you log in to the "artist area" (located on the top right of the home page)?

gumbomadness · Unread post by **gumbomadness** » Sat Jan 22, 2005 7:25 pm

tbillies86 wrote:Yo man, how did u get purevolume to work? I registered for the free membership and im trying to get it working, but when i search for myself it doesnt find me, its weird....think u can help?

You can update your purevolume just by logging in the ARIST area..
HOWEVER, it takes a few days before it is approved and you can search for youreself.
Dont worry tho, its there. Mine took 3 days to be approved.
My friends took 7 days. It usually doesnt take longer than that. But .. his band had like 5 pictures and mine only had one. So.. dont put too much so it gets approved faster, then add all you want.

tbillies86 · Unread post by **tbillies86** » Sat Jan 22, 2005 7:30 pm

oh thanks guys, yeah i JUST registered and confirmed...so i guess itll take a cpl days

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First Original: "Play"

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