A challenge from a friend = "The Weatherman"
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A challenge from a friend = "The Weatherman"
yup, i was challenged to write an upbeat song, and this lyrics was done in 2 mins. It popped up. I hope you like it.
the Weatherman
http://s21.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=089P ... C18DCCD9T1
http://www.angelfire.com/me5/kmt/
the Weatherman
http://s21.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=089P ... C18DCCD9T1
http://www.angelfire.com/me5/kmt/
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Put on some heavy strings and Jam the night away.
The KMT
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Put on some heavy strings and Jam the night away.
The KMT
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oh shitman! the beginning was funny as hell with the voices... how did you do that?
Theguitar part is fine lol.. and this song is very funny...
I live in south miami btw.
Aaannny way.. your voice has ALOT of potential you just get shakey on notes that are longer than .7 of a second...seriously. Once you stop the shakey part i think it will be fine.
You stay in key for the most part but there are points where you sound .. off.. either a littlesharp or a little flat but that all comes with practice. You can hear your accent through the song! hoorah
Theguitar part is fine lol.. and this song is very funny...
I live in south miami btw.
Aaannny way.. your voice has ALOT of potential you just get shakey on notes that are longer than .7 of a second...seriously. Once you stop the shakey part i think it will be fine.
You stay in key for the most part but there are points where you sound .. off.. either a littlesharp or a little flat but that all comes with practice. You can hear your accent through the song! hoorah
" I give up on this six string shit. "
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lol, yeah i transposed my voice at the beginning.
i use a different vocal scale this time for this song. THats why its shaky, i am not used to it. thanks for the comment.
i use a different vocal scale this time for this song. THats why its shaky, i am not used to it. thanks for the comment.
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Put on some heavy strings and Jam the night away.
The KMT
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Put on some heavy strings and Jam the night away.
The KMT
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lol, man i loved those voices...
i like the lyrics, but the singing could use some work and some more emotion.
the guitar was nice. this was cool.
i like the lyrics, but the singing could use some work and some more emotion.
the guitar was nice. this was cool.
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which one? why did you say tropical country instead of just saying the name of the country?Tranman66 wrote:nah man, i lived in a tropical country for 10 years, its not too bad down there.
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Vietnam. cuz i love that word tropical. and saying just VN doesnt mean its tropical.i am sam2 wrote:which one? why did you say tropical country instead of just saying the name of the country?Tranman66 wrote:nah man, i lived in a tropical country for 10 years, its not too bad down there.

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Put on some heavy strings and Jam the night away.
The KMT
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Put on some heavy strings and Jam the night away.
The KMT
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lol this one is not serious at all. I know. My vocal was allllll over the place in this one.MWR wrote:The rhythm was better on this one I thought. You still need some vocal lessons though.
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Put on some heavy strings and Jam the night away.
The KMT
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Put on some heavy strings and Jam the night away.
The KMT
I know it wasns't serious. I still say you would benifit greatly with some basic knowlege on the mechanics of singing. There's a lot more to it than you think.Tranman66 wrote:lol this one is not serious at all. I know. My vocal was allllll over the place in this one.MWR wrote:The rhythm was better on this one I thought. You still need some vocal lessons though.
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answer the man's question lolcrash_in_to_me wrote:but why did you just randomly insert that in theregumbomadness wrote:well.. ok fine. i dont live in SOUTH miami.. i live 20 minutes north of miami. seriously. this place is WAY too hot.
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Put on some heavy strings and Jam the night away.
The KMT
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Put on some heavy strings and Jam the night away.
The KMT
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