Collab cover of #41 with Whit!!!

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Collab cover of #41 with Whit!!!

Unread post by Speenis » Thu Jan 13, 2005 6:26 pm

Here it is yall, Whit and my friends and I (Mary Goes Round) covered the DMB song #41. Whit is on vocals, I am on rhythm guitar and a few Bela fills, and Paul plays lead. Hope yall enjoy!

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Unread post by mangold » Thu Jan 13, 2005 6:41 pm

the guitar was average... too many pauses for 41, it should flow more, you didnt mess up though, and it gets better as it goes.

whits your vocals were really good, im lookin forward to gettin my some devil part up for you to sing. expect it by the end of the week.

overall i really enjoyed this.
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Thu Jan 13, 2005 6:47 pm

Whit! I love your vocal. I am gonna fall in love with you just listening to you sing.. so good. The guitar has some awkward parts in the intro, but the rest is really good.
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Unread post by MrMister612 » Thu Jan 13, 2005 6:49 pm

That was pretty good, great great vocals. The rhythm guitar is a little choppy sounding at the beginning, but it does get a little better... just needs to flow hair better for 41.

This is just me, but i think having 3 guitars at the same time gets muddy, and just the one with the reverb would sound better by itself. (but tone down the effects just a hair, it doesnt sound as good as timmehs)

So, overall a great cover, I would just take out the 3rd guitar part and possibly redo the rhythm guitar(mainly the intro I think)

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Unread post by Kukini » Thu Jan 13, 2005 6:57 pm

The awkward strumming at the begginning sorta throws me off, but the rest is pretty good stuff, great vocals!
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Unread post by onid41 » Thu Jan 13, 2005 7:59 pm

Yeah definately a little choppy in the beginning and it does get better...overall pretty good

and i love your voice whit :D
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Unread post by Speenis » Thu Jan 13, 2005 8:27 pm

Yeah I've never really played this song a lot before all the way through so I just recorded it once.

MrM, I actually had 4 tracks going on and the one you're talking about was my friends track and he told me to put echo chamber on it so thats what I did. I threw in a little bass track so maybe thats what made it sound so muddy. My guitar tends to be really bright and I wasn't too happy with how the verse sounds. Thanks for all the criticism though fellas.
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Unread post by Speenis » Sat Jan 15, 2005 4:05 pm

Bump
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sat Jan 15, 2005 4:11 pm

were allowed to bump?
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Unread post by Speenis » Sat Jan 15, 2005 4:20 pm

gumbomadness wrote:were allowed to bump?
I just felt like bumping it so people could hear Whit, in fact, totally tone out the rhythm guitar when you listen.
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sat Jan 15, 2005 10:25 pm

the guitar wasnt choppy. .. and the cocals are very good as well.
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sat Jan 15, 2005 10:28 pm

ps- i love all the guitars they make it sounds really open and profound. If that makes sense...
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Unread post by tbillie41 » Mon Jan 17, 2005 10:46 pm

very nicely done. beautiful vocals.
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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Mon Jan 17, 2005 10:57 pm

tbillie41 wrote:very nicely done. beautiful vocals.

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Unread post by DMBartender » Sun Jan 23, 2005 4:48 pm

I really want to hear this...link expired.
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