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Please listen and comment - another original - WHOO

Unread post by Tranman66 » Fri Jan 14, 2005 11:44 pm

This is in memory of the tsunami incident. Listen to "Black Tsunamis"

http://www.geocities.com/trancoustic/mymusic.html
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http://s3.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3R2OE ... GR12H2UPVI
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http://www.angelfire.com/me5/kmt/

Black Tsunamis

Thousand miles beyong the sea
beyond the expectation of humankind
It's their lives their time to the limit
no where to see beyond whats ahead
is this the end? oh sleep tight

Chorus:
Black tsunamis waves of trouble
coming for you, for your existence
Black tsunamis beneath the quake
Am I too late? Is it too late?

Thousands of years people live and die
Just like no other i will do the same
Mothernature please have some compassion
for the force of existing love

Sorrow and pain come everyday
but nothing as powerful as this
the tsunamis of destruction
the life of this real imagination

Oh cry
Why on this day
Oh the image
running water running o
black tsunamis

Chorus:
Black tsunamis waves of trouble
coming for you, for your existence
Black tsunamis beneath the quake
Am I too late? Is it too late?

Sleep, sleep
sleep quietly the waves
Sleep the people
in peace
Last edited by Tranman66 on Sat Jan 15, 2005 9:25 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sat Jan 15, 2005 12:08 am

hey man... that was really good.
I LOOOOOVE that electric guitar in the background..
warm up your voice ^_^ and its golden.
But ya.. i love that electric guitar.. what is it and how did you get it like that?
" I give up on this six string shit. "
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Sat Jan 15, 2005 12:11 am

i mic the amp. then did a little echo and reverb effect. for echo i used taj mahal. Reverb is concert light. yeah i was surprised my 99$ electric sounds that good.
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sat Jan 15, 2005 12:11 am

whered you get it?
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Sat Jan 15, 2005 12:19 am

cool edit lol
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sat Jan 15, 2005 12:23 am

your electric is from cool edit?
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Sat Jan 15, 2005 12:24 am

no the effects. the guitar is just a peavy raptor from guitar center
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sat Jan 15, 2005 12:25 am

::nod::
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Unread post by eliot1171 » Sat Jan 15, 2005 1:22 am

I agree I love the elec. Good work on the lyrics....try and make the words blend a little better with the melody. Good over all.
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Unread post by deceptivehero » Sat Jan 15, 2005 2:36 am

the site says the link is down. I want to hear it.
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Unread post by gregplaysguitar » Sat Jan 15, 2005 3:05 am

deceptivehero wrote:the site says the link is down. I want to hear it.
Yeah, I couldn't get it either.

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Sat Jan 15, 2005 9:19 am

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The KMT

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Sat Jan 15, 2005 7:34 pm

bump
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Mon Jan 17, 2005 9:47 pm

sigh, second bump
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Unread post by tbillie41 » Mon Jan 17, 2005 10:40 pm

hey man, not too bad at all. I like the electric guitar, but i think it got to be a bit much, especially in the intro. i think if it was kept quieter it would be better.
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