First Original: "Play" (REMAKE) any better?

eliot1171 · Unread post by **eliot1171** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 6:57 pm

I posted this song all ready but I did't feel the recording was very good so I did it again. If you hadnt heard it before, please critique. If you have heard it before please critique my corrections.

"Play"

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Tranman66 · Unread post by **Tranman66** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 7:14 pm

this is better than the last one. vocal is better, slow and smooth. you got a nice voice man, with a good recording setup this can be awesome.

gumbomadness · Unread post by **gumbomadness** » Fri Jan 14, 2005 9:23 pm

hey man.. i looked at your site. its good stuff.. with alot of potential. Your voice is good and the guitar is solid.
The only thing you wanna make sure you do.. is jump around more (in style) because you will run the risk of sounding the same in all your songs.
Dont get me wrong, they are both good... but theyre simalar.
I like your choruses.
I like Play alot.. with better recording stuff it be realllly nice. You have a nack for song writing.

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First Original: "Play" (REMAKE) any better?

First Original: "Play" (REMAKE) any better?

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